I my self have lots of knowledge of the harry potter universe, and if you need some information, I am available. You can reach me faster on quotev, my handle is Victory's Path.

Now wrighters block I get, BUT IT'S BEEN 3 YEARS! ITS NOW 2015!
Please don't abandon this. This was -is- a great story don't give up! So what if you get a few facts wrong? You can try and it will still make us happy to know your still out there.
If you need facts get a pottermore accout or something, we don't mind.
Just please... Seeing a wrighter just give up on something makes me so sad... A wonderful story that flows off the page in a torrent of insperation.
Please all I'm saying is try, try for us!
We don't care if you make mistakes.

I could try although I've only read the first 5 books.

Awww...please continue...I could be a beta...never been one before...but my knowledge of Harry Potter...well...I read the entire series...and watched some of the movies...but I wouldn't consider that "integral" knowledge...but I can still help on grammar, spelling, technicalities like that...maybe ideas?

Ahhh! It's the dreaded authors note. It terrifies you with it's ability to make you think it's a real chapter until too late!

Good story but, Tom Riddle is Voldemorts real name. Tom Riddle came up with the name Voldemort by using his full name, Tom Marvolo Riddle. In The Chamber of Secrets, he scrambles up Tom Marvolo Riddle to come up with 'I am Lord Voldemort'.
In short, Lord Voldemort is the name he came up with for himself to have a name that will scare people, and his real name IS Tom Marvolo Riddle.
SFF

I hope u fone your Barry porter info providers. Unfortunetly i cannot assist u; i am not as knowledgable in the Barry porter universe as others. But ill give u my support. The story is wonderful so far

...hmmm...where's Dani? Is she gonna be in this?

You could get easy knowledge by getting a Pottermore account. It's pretty much really fun fancy cliff notes.

You're missing quite a lot of periods and the characters well...could be more in character. :P

Well...Danny got REAL cheated on that secret deal as he could've and would've, found out all of that stuff about magic anyway from accepting the deal. Knowing Danny, I doubt he would accept helping this "guy" without telling his friends or sister first. Or at least thinking about what joining a war could mean for them and Amity. :T

Also, I doubt Dumbledore would tell anyone else of such a dangerous plan and being before seing if he could get it on the Order's side in the first place to prevent word getting out.

And...the "with a vengeance" thing...is just kind of a lame line here. :p
My criticisms...

I would be willing to beta read for you. I am a big time Harry Potter fan (and DP fan).

Voldemort is evil as always. Scary

I can't but I know someone who will. Her name is Mulkkkkkk, and she has extensive knowledge of the hp universe, read her profile on the harry potter bit, it's hilarious
There may be more ks in her name, I wasn't sure how man, but there's more than one

I totally would volunteer (so does the dani in my head) to help you, except that I don't have an account and I can't give you immediate updates.
Dani muse: yeah, sorry about that.
Me: shut up dani. Don't make the guy feel worse.
Dani muse: not like you were recently melted into a puddle of ectoplasmic goo...
Me: what was that?
Dani muse: nothing. O.o what are you getting at?