Everything about this is goregous and heart-breaking. This fic was a pleasure to read.

please makeca long story for this

Excellent writing. I Started to cry because this was jus simply too touching. I feel like you really dove into the characters, and you portrayed them quite well. This was a wonderful piece of writing and I'm glad I read it~

It's just so... true. Real. Like it was supposed to be like this.

This was just... I mean... my god I know that they turn out all right in the actual anime/manga but the ending to this story made me forget that and for a moment I was actually really upset. I feel kind of empty now. Thisissuchagoodstoryyy. ;O;

. . .

Well, thanks for making me look like a hack. This was so great in comparison to anything I've ever written, it's almost comical. Alright, it *is* comical. You've always been really good, but I see now that you've leapt far beyond 'good' into some ingenious realm where overly-ambitious dullards such as myself can only fantasize about.

But let's not be pretentious here: this was fantastic. This is not some accidental stroke of literary luck, this is legitimately masterful craftsmanship indicative of tremendous skill. I hope you do know that I am pretty jealous at this point, as I've never written anything half as cool or interesting as this. (Grr.)

Be proud. You've achieved in less than ten thousand words here what many other authors will never touch even briefly, no matter how vast their ideas or goals are.

I teared up at this piece. *sniffles*

Your writing is wonderful!

I loved your story -~

Very nice and descriptive

~Sky'sShadow