Is it too much to hope that you might consider updating a story that’s almost 20 years old?

This fic is a blast. The plot is so engaging and full of twists that I had to read until the end even though it kept me up until 3 a.m. The dynamic between Sephiroth and Aeris is perfect, and I deeply appreciate that you’ve let them be complex, fully-fleshed out characters.

What a great story, pity it is abandoned :(

Wow. What a gripping story! I can't believe it hasn't been updated in years! You write well and you know how to capture and keep the attention of your readers. The plot of this story is intriguing and you've made both characters likeable - Sephiroth included. Only Vincent seems out of character. All in all, well done! :-)

I love the Planet-voice. Too many fics have the Planet completely conscious and speaking normally, when in the game it's obvious that the Planet's voice is indistinct and hard to understand. Good job!

"I am not a scientist," he said intently. "I do not care how. Tell me what."

Lovely passage.

update, please. And, if you have a spare moment, look into Twilight Perfection.

Cloud's 5'7". Other than that, not a thing wrong with the fic thus far, very good, very well done.

Nice story. Short, but lovely. Update soon.

Plz finish story someday Mem. It's too good to go unended

Holy shit.. i love this!

i really like this fic. See, look! I actually logged in! and saved it to my fave story list! it's prolly in the top 3 of my fave s/a fics, too. i only like in-character stuff, so this was so cool ... please add some more some time!

another great chapter! i really like how you portray sephiroth by giving him more human traits such as the opening dream in chpt 14 and his earlier encounter w/ his secretary. Also, I like the way A/S relationship is growing. i hope to read the next chapter soon. see ya _

Greath story! I'm impressed with how each character is portrayed. Keep up the great work and update soon!

Very well done. I'm particularly impressed with the opening sequence of chapter 14, as it shows Sephiroth to be human enough to have a dream of that nature to begin with-and human enough to be woken up by the nightmare it it turns into.

I do hope to see more, but do take your time if you need it. I know all about having to take a while to come out with new material.