Oh...this is looking promising. I hope Setsuna is Pluto, I always like worlds where magical combats collide with the world.

well, it's always a risk reviewing a fanfiction 5 years after it was published - but just in case you happen to see this (or other readers do) - wonderful work! I love the world you created and the care you took in fleshing out the shitennou characters as you did. I liked the inclusion of the world politics and religions. I loved Pluto's character (and her conversation with Mamoru at the end especially). Very good read, thank you for writing and sharing.

Wow, just...wow. This left me speechless, and the last few chapters made me get all emotional and teary-eyed. The plot, the setting, the characterization, all superb. The ending was so sad and yet so brilliantly poetic, I really have no complaints. You really out did yourself this time. I loved this, excellent work.

I just HAD to write something- so all of the inners (?) are on the darkside? Wicked twist!

How I wish this was a movie...sigh.

My incessant reviews are probably getting annoying- so I'll wait to review until the last chapter. Oh- I love, love Jeffery!

Well written once again! Kemal is getting his a$$ handed to him in this chapter! and yes, I'll probably end up reviewing each chapter!

This is such an intense opening! I'm loving it!

*sidenote* Chiba Mamoru- DEAD? I swear I would have fallen to my knees dramatically- had I not been laying down. I love it!

Awesome _

... I never read stories like this, but this one was just amazing! Thanks for putting it up!