i love this.. its perfect 3

2D is my baby

This deserves the attention of Jamie, I swear.
*Stan voice* This,
This is beautiful

This is exactly what I was looking for. I love redemption stories, thank you for writing this. :D

THAT WAS AMAZING! it was a bit harsh, and you cant just leave us with one chapter! XD but i loved it! it shows a little softer side to murdoc, without shipping them (as i dont ship 2doc) as a romantic/sexual couple!

10/10.

So gooooooood!

THAT'S IT you end it with no more chapters I don't care how old u are I know people who can put out twice then that in a week now anyways I love this xD I don't mean to be harsh ok a little harsh but your a good writer man and I loved abused 2d and murdoc and ofcourse him giving a shit what I love about fiction is that its not real so if u ever hear people say "oh I don't ship 2doc because its abusive" WELL WHO GIVES A SHIT ITS NOT REAL and as long as u know that and realize its abusive and is not crazy and can't see that then there's nothing wrong with it man good for you man umm btw I personally think fan fiction sucks its suck a depressing, armature, propaganda median but whatever I still read it anyways get into other medians or even more even if your 50 xD omg umm my favorite writer is Grant Morrison? Check him out if u don't already know him bye

Do a chapter 2 please is so noble prize like

I don't know if I should cry or smile. I mean, Murdoc just beat the tar outta 2D, but he'll try not to later. So... yay? Ish?

Murdoc... come on, man. Just... I don't know. Just, realize how much of an ass you are, okay?

Seeequeeel! Pleeeaaaseee!
I really liked this story, very well written and you're one of the few ppl who manage to actually write Murdoc as sadistic and violent without making it ridiculous by stereotyping or overdoing it.

really good, enjoyed it much!

Great story, hope you update!

I agree! Murdoc is acting too much like his father now! Though I'm not sure whether Noodle and Russell's presence will make him less abusive again.