Thank you for that story. I really enjoyed it. I hope when Erin gets much older that her and Keiran have a happy marriage.

Oh no. Why did they have to be interrupted right when they were about to talk...noooo.

I can't remember if I have reviewed or not so I will do so now. I am really enjoying this story! I love the Fisher King theme and the fear Jareth and that she will leave him again. Angst.

After I took a break and slept on it and came back. I was grateful I did. I got past the wedding and it worked out. I still cringed when Jareth told her she was really married but it honestly worked out very well with her age and I got past it. I just had a hard time being so in the moment and you’ve obviously written the characters and story so well that it made it seem too real. I was very invested and submerged. Although, I’m curious.. is there an Epliogue or a continuation of Erin’s story? I haven’t figured out how to navigate on DeviantArt. It was a pain trying to find the missing chapters. You’re very talented my dear. I loved it!

I love the storyline. I’m just REEEEAAAAALLLLLLY struggling with her age. It makes me so uneasy and nauseas at the thought of her marriage being legally binding or sleeping next to him. Having an 11 year old daughter. There is no way on earth I could behave so well or accepting with my daughter being married or away from me. My over protective nature would leave me a mama bear and you can count on me fighting till someone is dead. I’m only on page 12 and I’m having a hard time moving forward because I can’t get over the age. It would do much easier if she were 15 or something. More like an 8th/9th grader. Not a 5th/6th grader. I really do want to throw up at her being 12. My stomach is seriously tense and uneasy. I can’t stand the sensation it leaves me because I keep picturing my daughter and there is NO WAY IN HELL I would leave her behind or accept the marriage.

What an utterly wonderful story from first to finish. I followed up on chapter 17 and it didn't disappoint. So much love for this, brilliant.

Please post more or l will drown in my own tears (

I love this

Really enjoy what you have written so far.
Please update.

Please update! This is such a wonderful story and I'd hate to see it unfinished or abandoned.

I really enjoy reading this story. I actually read this a few years back and really liked it, but when I looked for it a few months ago, I couldn't find it, though it didn't help that I couldn't remember the title, so eventually I gave up. I read another story of yours and liked it, and clicked on your name to see what else you'd written, and this looked interesting, so I clicked on it, and then when I started reading the first chapter air recognized it and I got really excited, finding this story again and having a chance to re-read it was great and it really made me happy. Thank you for writing this story.

Really? 4 friken years? REALLY!

Love to know how it ends

I absolutely adore this entire story, so vivid imagination and the bond between Erin and Kieran is so stunningly sweet, I (and probably many others) would LOVE love love to see a sequel to this one, and how Erin and Kieran's relationship develops from here :)
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This is such a good story! I do hope that you plan on finishing it at some point!