Wow they really didn’t need to be together

Love the these stories but really really really hate the ending. Wtf man?! Oh well your the writer, and can end it how ever you see fit. Just a little sad they didn't end up together, is all. Happy future writing.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Love this keep this up

Please do a follow up on the third riddick movie too. Would like it if they could stay together in the end of that.

I'm so confused on how riddick and rhea made up but this was a good story anyways!

This chapter felt like it was not apart of the story. I did enjoy most of the story.

Im not surew i like the end...

not how i saw it end but still good :D

CANT...BLINK

loved it

very talented your very good never give up writing you've got real talent and imagination so again good job! _3_love-brittany

Oh come on when is the next update?

This is looking like a good sequel. I'm not sure I like that Rhea has superpowers now, but I'll get used to it, I suppose. I do like that you're continuing the story with Riddick as Lord Marshal. I'm really interested to see what you do with that. It was also nice to finally know why Rhea is a convict in the first place, and that flashback with Mr. Brookes and Rhea's mom was pretty believable. I'm very glad that you kept Riddick killing the Lord Marshal. I was worried for minute that you'd make Rhea kill him and end up as Lord Marshal. I also liked how you didn't drag out Crematoria, it was a nice touch to make Rhea come there with the Purifier, rather than being put in the slam with Riddick. Anyway, I'm very excited to see what happens in the next chapter.

Great chapters! Glad you did decide to include her background, too. I'd like to know a little more about Mystics, though. Keep writing!

Blessed be!~