Very cute. Soul you devil!

lolz and ouch
he asked for it though
and in spite of that she seems not to be to mad

Hah, this was way too adorable. Soul thinks he's so clever. :)

Hehe, oh Soul... :) Great story! keep writing! :)

So I've probably read this about a dozen times now, and every time I get more and more out of it. For such a small work, you have successfully packed quite a bit in here. Lovely piece.

This was wonderful! Short, sweet, and very very subtle; your imagery is perfect, both for this situation and this pairing.

I had to read the author's note to understand it, but once I did, I found it very amusing :D.

So, I'm not going to lie... I laughed at the "C-flat" in the beginning... C-flatB, and you have B right after that, so I suppose you might want to pick another note... XD

I didn't get it until I went back up and read the author's note. But I really love this. Cute, sweet, short, and got a good laugh out of me.

sweet ne. very nice

not sure i really get it, but . . . maybe that's a good thing?