I love your story! You've managed to create an incredibly likeable Link without having him speak any words besides his confession. You've made an OC girl that's strong without being mary-sue. Hell even with the confession and pregnancy part had me fangirl squealing and slightly crying happy tears (something that would be OOC for me). Well done!

This bonus chappie was so cute! I loved it! Thanks for writing this fic :3

AWWWW! That was so cute that Link's first line in this fic was "I love you" to San! I thought it was funny that you've kept him just as silent as he was in the actual game, but I see now that you've been waiting for this moment before he would talk. You sly author! :)

This is a great fanfic, it makes me sad you won't write any more chapters T.T now I have to go find some other fanfic

Awww! Soo cute :D

Whoa! Link TALKED! WHOAAA! *minds being blown* BOOOOM!

This story was great and very very touched my heart and I have to say you are a fantastic writer.I am going to recommend this story to many of my friends. Great job!

This is possibly one of the better LoZ stories with an OC involved that I've read, it's original and well written. San isn't even close to being a Mary-Sue (great job on that) :)

First thing, I applaud you for writing this entire story portraying Link as he is in the games. I know a lot of people believe Link doesn't speak but I'm awfully sure he does. I mean...there are scenes where it's obvious he would have to do some talking in order for the people around him to know what's going on. Haha... Next, I want to say that I absolutely love how the only single REAL dialogue Link has in this story is his confession. Reading that part just about made my heart melt. D And reading through this made me realize Link is the epitome of the saying "actions speak more than words." Also, I really love how he went about guessing what San's surprise was. That's soOo cute and adorable! There's just something about a man when he's holding his hand against his woman's abdomen when she's pregnant...like it's just soOo meaningful! XD Anyways, lastly, I want to say that you did a really good job with this story and I truly enjoyed reading through it. Thanks for sharing something like this with us!

cool story

He talked! * puts hands up victoriously* HUZZAH WE REJOICE! lol

Also I wished this story had more reviews. But either way really good story! :D

I truly loved this story! It was so well written and you are an excellent writer. I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future! :)

Wow, just wow. Love it, just love it.

This is really one of those stories that most readers understimate, I'm proud that I got hooked on (read it in less than a day). And you truly left me in awe, reading it felt like playing the game once more! (My poor Wii left me for someone else.) But good thing is I got nothing bad to say about it. I think once I found one tiny typo, but it was so well written, greatly versed and extremely faithful to the detail of Link not speaking. I guess that's what captivated me the most, at first I thought: "that's too difficult to pull off." But as the reading went on I found it so rich in details, that I just fell in love with it. Heck! It even made me think of my unfinished stories. But seriously, if I could give you an award for this I would.

I really wish for you the best.

PS. If you don't believe I got hooked on try reading it in Anatomy class and ignoring essays and studying for two Anatomy test. That's how good it was.

Adrianne

Awesome story, just awesome, I'm amazed how you managed to pull off quiet Link through the whole story.(Well almost the whole story xD)