Reviews for That Fine Line
twhiddleston chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
I really loved this story... Awesome, couldn't stop reading it.

Great job!
ab89us chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
Sad to see it end. I love all of it though!
ab89us chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
Why am I addicted to your fics? Oh right...Because they're awesome! I'm loving this so far!
Mochi-girl chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
I really enjoyed this! Love that you brought John Scott back into Olivia's head. Sam Weiss was the bus driver? WTF? Excellent!
Cortexikid chapter 4 . 6/26/2010
Wonderful, as usual. I would love to see a sequel :) Beautifully written with a unique plot. Really enjoyed it, can't wait to read more of your stuff. ~Cortexikid :)
Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
I enjoyed reading this,I was hoping for a Bolivia reunion in the final chapter,but the way you left it, leaves an opening for a sequel, which Yes, I would love to see, hope to read more from you soon.
MildlyPsychotic chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
The ending was awesome, as was the entire fic, so I'm going to request a sequel! 8D
loneguppy chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
It was a very good story. I liked how it showed off Olivia's inner strengths in a tough situation and still left quite vulnerable at the end.
SamSpade chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
Fabulous ending! Sam was able to help guide Olivia home but it was of her own doing. Loved the fire :D The girl has skills and powers we are all itching to see. You know I'd love to see an epilogue of Liv finding out about Alt Liv ... but I won't twist your arm, just ask really nicely, pretty please :P
Weeping Angel Of Fear chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
so good!

please please please keep writing
Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
This gets more and more interesting, can't wait to read what happens next, have fun on your vacation and yeah we should definitely have a chat when you get back,update soon.
SamSpade chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
Wow first Peter's voice, his smell and taste-and then Sam showed up. I'm so glad our Liv isn't going crazy and Sam has been trying to help her. Though drugging her without her knowledge hardly seems fair but if it gets Olivia home safely, Sam will be forgiven :P
Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
Glad to see something new from you, interesting plot, loving it so far, I wonder who will appear next, can't wait to read the next chapter, update soon.
SamSpade chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
Awwww Liv seems to be losing her mind, seeing Charlie visiting her now after John. Can't really blame her for being a wreck-I mean she is locked in a dark cell, it's bound to make anyone crazy.
Hiphuggers2 chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
More please!
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