Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful!

Good hub. "Thumbs Up".

omg...i think i just died from how cute that was. yep, this is my ghost giving her final thoughts. too much cute, so cuuuuuuuuutttttteee! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

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Brotherly love :P
Did you mean werewolf back there or wer-wulf as some creature?

Wow. I just read your AMM and saw you'd written some Narnia stories so I thought I'd have a look. And I am so glad I did!

Nice great work.

Edmund and Peter really do have a brother's complex. But everybody loves that so it's okay. Haha.

Love it!

I like how when Rorin yelled at Susan and Peter that the only thing that Peter thought of was that Edmund was wounded and by wer-wulfs! Gah, it's just so cute!

It was confusing as to where they were

Absolutely wonderful! I must say, you are a wonderful writer! I've been blown away by every story of yours that I've read! Keep up the good work!

That was beautiful.

Lovely story as the Pevensie's first get sorted out by Rorin in Narnia by the guardian angel Rorin.

hen peter finally repairs his relationship with Edmund. A great story.

I love this fanfic so much..

I loved it :)

Have I ever told you how much I love you?

Well... Moreso your stories than anything... Especially your brotherfics. They make me much happier than they should.

I wish I could write emotions as beleivably and as well as you do. The way that yo write the relationships between whichever characters you choose is always so well bought out and realistic. I admire you greatly, and am immensely jealous of your skills.

This is rather a generic review, but it would take me weeks to review every story of yours that I have read, which is all of them except the Digimon ones. I've never seen it... Maybe I'll watch it just so I can read more of your writing...

Anyways, update/publish more stuff soon... Specially Narnia, though your LOTR stuff is awsome too...

Anyways, I'll stop rambling now...

~not_you_15~