This was sweet.

woah...what happens next?! I need to know! this one shot needs to continue, I need closure(:

Is palpatine just sitting there throughout all of this?

Nice. Who was talking/thinking at the end? - Larka

I'll pretend you did not leave off there. ;_;

I must commend Luke's strong belief in the possibility of overriding Sidious's influence. Is that faith and the resulting connection with Vader what gave the title to the story?

Very moving! And a rather original take on events!

Please continue!

Oh my GOD I love this! Are you continuing? Please continue! I'm an absolute sucker for the father/son thing, and I loooove this new spin on their ROTJ battle. I really hope you're continuing, we need more of these kind of fics!

Really good story start. You write the depth of their feelings really well. I am a little confused about what Luke did, exactly. Are they sharing a vision, or did he actually transport them somewhere (I'm thinking it's the vision)? What is going on with thier bodies while they are having this vision? Like, is Palpatine doing something nasty to their statue-like, frozen bodies during all this time (wouldn't he have fun with that?) or are they continuing to fight as in the movie scene? And, yes, I'd love to know what happens next, pretty please.