I enjoyed reading this! :D your grammar was good, story was fantastic, and the way you described it was rather amusing.

The Akuroku part was eh...but I LOVED the rokushi part! Tell me, they stay together after all that, right? o.o

that was nice to me it looks like a young girl walking in in on her mommy and daddy not know what they were doing she then goes to her friend to find out that's what I thought it was cute and a little funny I liked it

This a really good story although i normally prefer yaoi and Akuroku (sorry I'm a Akuroku fangirl (: ) this was something i could enjoy reading that was different for me. Really nice,

with love,

myangel16