Reviews for Choices |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just wondering, when did she get promoted to major? She's a major in chapters 6 and 7, but no mention of anything... GREAT story and I'm a bit devastated i only just found it .. Can't wait for more story's :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a little note hun.. You have at the start of this chapter saying it has been 3 years then a few paragraphs down it says 4 years they were apart before it goes back to 3 years later on ... Also your beta left you a comment that hasn't been edited out, just after you have "close after he had Goa'uld" .. Also that sentence isn't complete :) Loving it by the way :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why am i only finding this one now? :( .. Loving it already :) .. Might have to re-read DB though hehe :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very nice to read. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that everything worked out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very hot! I hope everything works out for them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! What happened with the General? What did Sam talk to him about? I hope everything works out! I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible chapter! Very emotional! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! Very emotional! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Is Sam a captain or a major, because she was called both! I hope everything works out for them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm digging this story so far. Your characterisation is good and it's well written. It's no biggie it's unbeta'd, the only grammatical error that sticks out is the use of lower case 'i' instead of I. Good work, I've enjoyed what I've read so far, so now I'm going to get to reading it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Story. |