| Reviews for The New Leaf |
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Bronze chapter 3 . 10/13/2018 Ya know, had they also sent a CH-47 Chinook with a two pallets slung under it, one with a loud noise maker and the other with several Napalm bombs or huge drums of the stuff, set out on one of the runways to draw the zombies to it would've made their escape much easier. The zombies being drawn to loud noises and bright flashing lights would've gone to those and left Harry and company alone. Once surrounded by most of the zombies the Napalm is detonated and thus getting ride of more zombies. It has the added side effect of not damaging the runway too badly as well. |
animerule64 chapter 5 . 9/18/2018 Add more chapters please |
Schazmen chapter 5 . 8/2/2018 Aside from needing a lot of spell-checking, this was a great story. Harry maybe a little too... dominant and ass-kicking to be realistic, but I liked it altogether. I'm actually sad I didn't find this story until now. |
Gomago chapter 1 . 3/23/2016 "A very fast half an hour" (Laughs and Laughs) that is so revealing a sentence. |
ripper34 chapter 5 . 7/25/2015 Great story |
thelonewander117 chapter 4 . 4/30/2014 Not bad, not bad at all. I like how Harry was done here. Im quite happy a sequel was made. time to read that now. |
Skylar Datenshi chapter 4 . 8/5/2013 AW I had hoped that Harry would take them with him. |
Skylar Datenshi chapter 2 . 8/5/2013 Ooh boy, how does he plan to explain this one? |
Skylar Datenshi chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 O.o Wow. Voldemort is showing care for his 'rival'?! Stop the presses! |
Leticia Moriarty chapter 5 . 4/11/2013 cool story so far |
Elfhunter chapter 4 . 4/7/2013 'Moving on he stripped off his dirty, bloody, slimy and torn clothes. Aiming a slew of cleaning charms and cloth repairing charms, the clothes the stains and rips slowly disappeared from the fabric. Putting the clothes and some of his knives and sheathes he had used inside the trunk; he drew out a set of jeans and a plain t-shirt, leaving the boots he had used so far out. The last Potter then turned on the shower and relaxed under the hot water, cleaning the blood and slim off of his skin and out of his hair.' During this paragraph (sorry about copying it all, thought it would be the easiest way) you use 'slim' and not 'slime'. If you care about that all...well there you go. I greatly enjoyed the story line and am curious as to how Harry will deal with his English problems. |
Elfhunter chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 It makes sense in the game, but I always thought it was strange when reading fan-fics that there was a 'safe-house' during a zombie invasion. You know, just kind of randomly spaced in normal neighborhoods. But I love the plot line. |
Penny is wise chapter 4 . 10/16/2012 Awesome story. |
ChaosIdeals chapter 5 . 9/18/2012 This was amazing! I loved it.. and now I go onto the sequel :3 |
RStone8 chapter 4 . 6/28/2012 Excellent story! |