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This story was definitely interesting,I never would thought of this type of story,seeing Raspberyl beat Mao a had me going crazy saying “ NO FREAKING WAY! constantly XD,but I liked it because it was creatively different,the ending just demands a sequel IMO,I love to see some actually lovey dovey romance with Mao and Beryl in the sequel,there hasn't been enough serious romance with those two lately IMO _

This is such a sweet story! I absolutely love it!

And having the two of them reverse roles is fun.

hi! loved the story! keep writing!

A pretty quick ending, but a good story overall.

I can't wait to see what Mao does. I'm very curious. There are a few errors, but I'm pretty sure you're aware of them. Other than that, it's a great story. I love MaoBeryl, and I think you're doing some justice for FanFiction. This place needs more MaoBeryl!

hmm.. interesting. what will he do? I am curious about it. XD

I hope you update soon )

A really interesting twist to the part of the game where Raspberyl was kidnapped by the PTA. I hope you update soon!

wow... nice story. Can't wait for the rest of the story D

Awesome story. Keep it up!

Hi!

really like your story, post the rest! also i checked out your ideas for other stories and they sound really good! keep it up!

(theirs not enough disgaea 3 story's on here ugh!)

anyway good luck!