Great story

OH MY GOD! This is so amazing! Are you going to update? Please do...

Okay, this is sooooo good! Haha, Fang got beat up by a girl :P Well the girl was Max, but still...Anyways, I hope you update soon :)

awesome

Who's Kitty again?

please please update!

Sorry, I can't login on my stupid iPod T-T but I really love your story and hope you continue soon. Please don't kill Gazzy off, he's one of my favorite people on there.

Oohh! Funny. I like Max beating up Fang. Good job. Please continue.

WOW... that's really good. sooooooooo...YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! I will give you a virtual kitten or dog or mouse or snake!(no, really, i have all of them!)

It seemed good... it was confusing because it jumped around a lot, though. Clearly dividing the flashbacks from the rest would be helpful, as would describing what was happening in the flashback part a bit better as well would help. OR! Since a flashback is normally used for dramatic effect in the right places, and a prologue is usually there to provide a good background, you could make the intro in chronological order and use snippets later to add drama to a scene. (Although that sentence itself was confusing.) It is a good base to work from, either way. Oh, and I didn't think Max was OOC at all, she was happy around her flock. Although cutting herself off mid-word /was/ a bit strange.

I hope this didn't come off as preachy or anything like that, and I do hope this updates.

OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE IT REALLY SOON PLEASE! :)

KEEP WRITING PLEESE OR I WILL UNT U DOWN TIE TOU TO A CHAIR AND FORCE YOU TO HUNT. JK I'M TO NICE TO DO THAT. BUT SEAROUSLY KEEP WRITING

WRITE ON

SCIZZORS

it was really good. If you dont post anouther chapter soon then i will reach threw the computer screan and strangle u.

cnt wait

well if there was any ooc-ness i didnt notice this is an awesome! chapter :D PLLLLEEEEEEAAAASE WRITE MOOOOOORRRRRRRE! soon :3