hahaha! this guy Jack reminds me the hearted version of Damon Salvatore. I love both

Awesome! Loved it!

...I just had to totally go actually watch Barrowman singing Anything Goes. Hee!

Could be a very happy threesome in Jack's and Chloe's immediate future, it looks like. :)

Re-reading this for the first time in many years, and I just had to compliment you on this explanation of the weevils apparent haunting of Torchwood and Jack - it's just fandom on the weevils' part! :)

Wow, just wow. Have you ever thought of doing a sequel to this story? I will totally read a Ianto/Jack/Chloe triad story based off of this.

Awesomeness!

Okay, while I enjoy much of what you're doing here, and I like Lana as little as the next man, you're railroading her character something fierce. For one, I don't think she'd behave the way she did to Chloe and last I heard, she wasn't turned on by torture.

you just blew my mind

Interesting start

It was really good. Could use a bit of editing but other than that a really good story!

The story is wonderful! I love all the chapters but the one thing that sticks out the most is you included Janet! I love Janet :) Thank you!

Please let there be a sequel and it not be you torturing your audience with a cliffhanger you never intend to resolve!

Wow - just read this whole bit at once, and I LOVED it! You handled the characters and plot twists beautifully.

Thank you!

(But, the picky editor in me has to point out you need to keep an eye on the plural (Luthors) vs. possessive (Luthor's) vs. plural possessive (Luthors').)

Oo, the plot thickens. Much Lana hate going on here. Harold Saxon is bad news. Ut-oh. The JLA verses the Master, who is potentially going to tag team with the Luthors. Bad news indeed! Hope Hart returns to help ;) (I always held out for Lex to be a "good" Guy. Its a nice wish of mine for you to make Lex be helpful and not supervillian #1)