Yes, he was called to the hospital, but why did he leave Jane there? If he wasn't involved with her, he would have ushered her out, right?

This was such an emotion pulling story, and it brought out my bloodthirsty side. Thanks to the quarantine I was able to read this gem. I know it is years too late, but I really want to know what the hell emo-Leah was doing all the time in her room.

Dammit, how can Bella gloss over the facts that Victoria was pumping her for information?! Did her journalistic instincts completely die out?!

Tanya is like the roach that just won’t die.

And now I’m angry at stupid, flight Renee, who would rather chase a man than stay for her daughter.

The redhead is Victoria, isn’t she?

Fine, I have forgiven Doucheward, but only because he was stabbed repeatedly.

I so want all of these cultists to die from wine poisoning.

I’m disappointed in Bella for constantly apologizing for something so minor. I didn’t hear Edward apologizing for saying cruel things to her, or almost running her over with a car. I wish she would get some self respect.

That said, I love your story! Don’t think I don’t. You make your characters come alive, which makes me want to kill some of them (mainly, Edward, Renee, and Carlisle)

I hope Bella kicks him in the balls. Bella did not deserve to be treated so cruelly yet again, and this time he did it in front of Jasper and Billy. He almost ran over Bella, and all but barely pushed her onto the floor.

Edward is an abusive fuck, that’s what he is and he does not deserve Bella.

I don’t understand why Edward is upset. Bella was within her right to not mention anything about Jacob.

So Victoria is one of the Volturi?

Edward has not redeemed himself at all. While Bella walked around like a zombie, so utterly broken for years, that it took Jacob to help her get a little bit out of her shell, just enough to have mediocre sex with only one guy, instead of having the fun college experience, she should have enjoyed, Edward was off gallivanting in college having fun and being with sleazy girls.

Bella was right to slap him, Edward need to get STI tests done, who knows where Tanya has been.

I can just picture Emmett being all Kindergarden cop on the little tykes.

Holy crap, Heidi is a mole! And from the looks of it,Renee was once part of this society, which would explain why she stays away from any device that can track her.