great story please update

I like Alex and Lorelai. Just a little tip...but you don't have to take it. You don't have to keep saying he said, she said, he asked, she asked after each of them say something. Also instead of putting "uh yea he is." she tells him and "so when are we heading back?" she asks him...you can combine the two, since Lorelai is speaking both of those parts. Like: "Uh yea he is." she tells him before asking, "So when are we heading back?" that way it's easier to read and flows better. But once again, it's just a tip. :) Overall well written.