Reviews for Torn
KuroHinata chapter 30 . 4/12/2019
ah, just joint attack and destroy whatever Master and be the Master already.
KuroHinata chapter 15 . 4/12/2019
akatsuki
KuroHinata chapter 8 . 4/12/2019
I don't know who the man / lord / whatever are. confuse who they are as you can't get a visual here, if I'm confused by the description I can create/imagine what they are so all the characters in this chapter are a blur.
Maria.k.b.k chapter 3 . 4/11/2019
excuse you? the woman you 'loved and let go'? you betrayed her. there's a difference bud.
Maria.k.b.k chapter 2 . 4/11/2019
wooohoooo! go Alanna! how dare that jerk betray her!get ur revenge! (even tho i know she probably won't, but only time/author will tell so...)
FranFran chapter 23 . 12/5/2018
Wow, I haven't stopped reading since I starting this earlier today and I'm in love!
Zezily chapter 30 . 12/8/2016
NO NOT RAKU
Zezily chapter 29 . 12/5/2016
Yes please keep writing
Zezily chapter 23 . 12/5/2016
Amazing!
Zezily chapter 21 . 12/5/2016
You can really feel how she has been broken, and i tgink that it will be awesome seeing her grow
Zezily chapter 16 . 12/2/2016
What happend to her brother?
Zezily chapter 9 . 11/30/2016
Love thom
Zezily chapter 6 . 11/30/2016
I was wondering how he would take it
Zezily chapter 5 . 11/30/2016
Really love this story, it's so well written
Guest chapter 38 . 10/8/2016
I feel as though I do not have a life. I have been waiting since December 2015 for another chapter. I have read this story enough times that I have almost memorized it. For the sake of my sanity, please update soon
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