| Reviews for Torn |
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KuroHinata chapter 30 . 4/12/2019 ah, just joint attack and destroy whatever Master and be the Master already. |
KuroHinata chapter 15 . 4/12/2019 akatsuki |
KuroHinata chapter 8 . 4/12/2019 I don't know who the man / lord / whatever are. confuse who they are as you can't get a visual here, if I'm confused by the description I can create/imagine what they are so all the characters in this chapter are a blur. |
Maria.k.b.k chapter 3 . 4/11/2019 excuse you? the woman you 'loved and let go'? you betrayed her. there's a difference bud. |
Maria.k.b.k chapter 2 . 4/11/2019 wooohoooo! go Alanna! how dare that jerk betray her!get ur revenge! (even tho i know she probably won't, but only time/author will tell so...) |
FranFran chapter 23 . 12/5/2018 Wow, I haven't stopped reading since I starting this earlier today and I'm in love! |
Zezily chapter 30 . 12/8/2016 NO NOT RAKU |
Zezily chapter 29 . 12/5/2016 Yes please keep writing |
Zezily chapter 23 . 12/5/2016 Amazing! |
Zezily chapter 21 . 12/5/2016 You can really feel how she has been broken, and i tgink that it will be awesome seeing her grow |
Zezily chapter 16 . 12/2/2016 What happend to her brother? |
Zezily chapter 9 . 11/30/2016 Love thom |
Zezily chapter 6 . 11/30/2016 I was wondering how he would take it |
Zezily chapter 5 . 11/30/2016 Really love this story, it's so well written |
Guest chapter 38 . 10/8/2016 I feel as though I do not have a life. I have been waiting since December 2015 for another chapter. I have read this story enough times that I have almost memorized it. For the sake of my sanity, please update soon |