| Reviews for Scars |
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   Angelus 408 chapter 1 . 1/31/2018 Aw, but you left out the healing; how they all get through and past it. I Would like to see that. Thanks. |
| anon chapter 1 . 12/21/2010 amazingly good job! this deserves so many more reviews! really, thanks so much for writing this! |
| cdewinter78 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 This was amazing. I have a soft spot for Caleb the size of Kansas and love the story you have tagged here. You have done an amazing job sculpting not only Caleb's character but the interplay between Damien and Deuce, true to the Ridley mould! LOL. Fantastic work, thanks for the read. Abi. |
| Aimed mischief chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Wonderful, just wonderful. _ |
| AllieMcD chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 i loved this, the caleb and dean realtionship is probably my favorite thing about the brotherhood stories and this was a great tag for the one, it really fit right in |
| Ridley chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 Wow, that was just wonderful. The characterizations were so good, and the sentiment and Caleb's thoughts at the end were poignant and heartbreaking, and true. You did an excellent job with this. I hope you will dip your pen in this universe again. I can't tell you how much I really, really enjoyed this piece. I think my favorite line was the one where Caleb sometimes felt as if the boys were leaving him behind, but at times as if he had to slow down to let them catch up. That was so telling. I always feel wierd commenting on Caleb, but you nailed him just the way I imagine him reacting. Thank you for taking the time to share this with us! Ridley |
| Rhesa chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 great addition to the brotherhood fanon. well done |
| adder574 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 I really liked this. It's good that Dean has Caleb to talk to. He needs someone. |
| L. Burke chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 I really enjoyed this. You show the price being one of the good guys very, very well. This also showed what a struggle it must have been for Caleb to let go and start seeing Dean as fellow hunter. For constructive criticism I’m going to tag you on “Ex Marine”. There’s no such thing- Once a Marine always a Marine. The term John would have taught the boys would be “Veteran Marine”. “Ex- Marine” implies dishonorable discharge and time in Leavenworth. Overall I really enjoyed this. |
| Sensue chapter 1 . 6/13/2010 Awww. So wonderful! Truly. Made me want to go and hug them all. Now i've got to re-read Iron Will. :) Have a wonderful day Suzanne (Sensue) |
