That love scene of the game is for kids.
Now this scene that you described ... wow ! It was more or less as I imagined. I loved your story from beginning to end and I confess that since the day I read it, it does not leave my head.
Big hug.

Aquela cena de amor do jogo é pra crianças.
Agora essa cena que descreveste... uau! Era mais ou menos assim que eu imaginava. Amei do início ao fim tua história e confesso que desde o dia em que a li, ela não sai da minha cabeça.
Grande abraço.

I really liked it! Definitely gonna book mark it. I find a lot of scenes that take place later or what not so I really love that this is in camp. Lots of detail and very cute!

I swear. I mostly laughed at reading this.

Damn that was steamy. I'm not a fanfic kind of person but I can appreciate this

I enjoyed it! I hope you'll make one for Anders and Hawke in DA 2 because that also leaves something to be desired! (Though it's quite romantic).

This is so perfect! Playful and hot at the same time! In my head this is totally canon! Thank you! ️

Excellent. A few minor typos here and there, and one or two insignificant genre 'errors' (boxers are neither era or game consistent really). On the whole, the story is quite good. Well paced, good detail and still classy/not vulgar. 4 stars I'd say- good work.

that was great! with it written in first person point of view, i felt like it was Alistair and me!

Beautifully done! It showed just how shy, sensitive and loving Alastair is but also gave the raunchy sex that the game sadly failed to produce.

Okay that was hilarious, good job!

Wow. Just. Wow. My panties have evaporated.

man it's a rpg game not a hotty one :))

This is literally the holy grail! I love this SOOO much

Very nice fic :) I always enjoy smut when Alistair is involved *-*

This is pure gold.
10/10 bookmarked for science