This was great! I love this!

Interesting story. You took me by surprise with having Missouri serve as god. It kind of works. It certainly makes things easier for Team Free Wheel. I was looking forward to more adventures.

I really like your story. Honestly, if you hadn't mentioned that English wasn't your first language I would not have guessed that. And what you've written is great. It's drawn me in to the point where I just want to read the next chapter and not take time to write a review. I like that Adam is more open with his feelings, and I really like that Dean is trying to be the supportive, big brother. I get the underlying tension with Sam and Dean's concerns. Also, it's nice to have the levity brought in by Rumsfeld.

I seriously loved it! Man I wish things could have gone like this, spare those boys some pain! This was incredible, thank you for writing such wonderful fluff!

This well written, I will give you that. I love Adam stories, and I greatly appreciate the length of this one. (Most are very short.) So far I’ve only read the first chapter, but will be inclined to continue. Furthermore, I do have a few comments to make. First of all; The relationship pacing is a little weird. In chapter one, Dean and Adam are already best friends. Dean calling Adam ‘little brother’. That just wouldn’t happen. We could already see in the “Jump the Shark” episode that Dean was extremely wary of Adam, even when he learned that Adam was their brother and they were shown proof. Sam doing that? Alright, I can see it, sort of. Not Dean though, or at least not right away. I love the Adam and Dean brotherly love as much as the next person, but you have to give it time to grow. Dean considering the real Adam his younger brother as soon as he layed eyes on him, just doesn’t make sense. Especially for Dean’s character. Give it space, it should be one of the main points of conflict. It makes building their relationship fun, and also enjoyable to read. That’s the second thing, the characterization. Adam hasn’t been in many episodes, so messing around with him is fine. No one really knows exactly what his personality is like (Though obviously we’ve got a bit of a clue). He’s generally not my real problem here. For Sam I can’t say anything yet. Dean, on the other hand, at least in chapter one, is a little bit than more off. It’s like...not even Dean Winchester. Like the moment you said, “Dean smiled at Adam proudly” (I’m not sure, there was some sentence like that.) It doesn’t make any sense, especially the way Dean looked at Adam since the beginning of the episode. (Though I do admit, Dean is difficult to write, and I will give you a pass on that one.) My last point would be their sense of urgency. This is probably the thing that almost ruined the chapter for me. When Dean looked into the coffins, seeing not only the dead Kate Milligan, but REAL Adam Milligan, he KNEW that meant Sam was with the fake Adam. He also would’ve known that meant Sam was in danger. So what the hell is he doing joking around with Adam, telling him stories in the car, standing outside the Impala calmly with holy water, etc.? It is COMPLETLY out of character for Dean. He barley knows Adam, but the prospect of Sam being in danger, the brother he does know, is anything to turn him into panic ‘shoot first ask questions later’ mode. He would’ve thrown Adam into the back of the Impala, and sped to the Milligan house where Sam was. Maybe told Adam forcefully once to, “Stay in the car.” and barge inside with his shot gun. The taking it slow, talking Adam out of going inside sort of thing is a little bizarre, if anything. This generally all ties into the ‘tone’ of the chapter. How do your readers to feel? Personally, I can’t feel scared for Sam OR Adam because Dean’s acting so freaking relaxed. Which, again, adds to the wrong characterization of his character. Anyways, I hope you take this into consideration. Again, I will continue reading this story. This comment is meant to be purely constructive, I just hope it helps. Thanks :)

Cas! I wanna know Cas' reaction to Adam ... I also was hoping Cas/Dean

IT WAS NICE i ENJOYED IT A LOT! I LIKE TO SEE THAT THEY DO CARE FOR ADAM

Will there be mention of Balthazar? he loved Cas a lot! but its so nice to see how they feel so fluffy and family like

why dont they ask Cas to cure Adam?

jaja poor Adam, but it was cool.

iT NICE AND LOVELY BUT DEAR SAM WHYYYYY?

Its nice i WOULD LOVE TO SEE Sam and Adam having a moment together!

jaja it was nice and I loved Bobby but.. Adam was pre-med so he must have to learn latin o.o

It was cute that Sam tryed to be up for Adam ang the he ended up asleep XD also I love how caring they are.

I liek to see Adam be with his brothers and to see them fight and know each other! and its nice to see him strong