sorry but this was horrible i dident even no whos view it was in and what happened to parrick and the hell is with all the blah lah lada lada lada stuff like really?

nice plan :-)

can't wait for more!

I know that the blonde one is names Michelle. I have no idea what the other one was named, sorry(

The blonde cheerleader's name is Michelle and the African American's name is Kaitlin.

Michelle is this the white one the black one is Katelyn but there are different kinds of spelling for Katelyn

This chapter was OK. Who is Athena by the way. Please update ASAP.

I like this chapter. I thought the girl who switched the tapes was named Tabitha. Doesn't matter what name you put, I know who you're talking about lol. I like Athena's plan to help Kat. I think she approves of Katrick but wants to know Kat better since she knows what happened in Pat's past & wants to make sure Pat doesn't get hurt. Can't wait for more.

The girl that switched the videos is Tabitha Cook.

The 'indian chick's' name is Gaya and she was dressed as a naked mole rat in Kat's video.

Your grammar needs major improvement and you use words/phrases wrong. I think it was the last chapter: the phrase is FOR ALL INTENTS AND PURPOSES, NOT 'intensive purposes'. A good BETA wouldn't hurt.

Your beginning note sounds somewhat racist.

It's not

Jessica It is Tabitha cook, they said it in the episode and previous episodes

so is Patrick related to Athena? can't wait to read more.

Ohhh that one was much easier to understand)

Best wishes,

Alex LUCeli

I love the "I had to Wiki that" line!

This chapter was good. This story is slightly confusing so you should probably put the chapters in order to make it more clear to the reader.

I don't get it.