This is great! I've been waiting for something like this for a long time. Good job Umbra Luna. Though there is somethings that could be a bit better, excellent work!

I really liked this story execpt for one thing. the big daddy's the way you described two of them didn't make sense throught my travels in the universe of games I have noticed quite a bit about big daddys 1. they are utterly ruthless killing anyone who oppose them 2. they are not stealthy enough to not be noticed among the wastes people everywhere would have seen them and attempted to kill them. but besides that really good read

I know it's kind of late, like 2 years late, but if yu read this i'll be happy. Last night I had a dream about a different fallout 3/bioshock crossover. more about rapture in the wasteland but anyways. your story is really well written and I was a little disappointed when it ended because I think it has real potential. good luck.

Where did you go? It's been over 2 years! Interesting stories need conclusions!

nice story. :)

Really enjoying the story, I hope to see an update soon!

I like this story! Its cool and exciting and reminds you of all the good yet horrible things in Bioshock and Fallout. Please update soon.

Sincerely, Ebony

Very interesting story. I greatly look forward to the next chapter you have in store.

I like the story but was sad to see that it has not been updated since January. Will you be adding more chapters or have you lost interest. The content had a good flow, easy to read. I would enjoy reading more.

More I like this story

Awesome please update xD

Nice Story Umbra, im gonna keep reading this through, think i might be hooked, and awesome concept, big thumbs up :)

Damn that was a long wait... Shame on you :( Nothing else to say really.

Nice story please keep making till the end of this story :)

Love this story so far, to bad what happendot your hard drive.