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I ran out of room on the first review...

The biggest thing you need to do is- ONLY WORK ON ONE STORY AT A TIME! You have SO MANY STORIES YOU STOPPED WORKING ON & YOU START WRITTING NEW ONES! It gets REALLY anoying. You are NOT going to get any fanbase unless you start working on your stories.

Oh! I have NO problem going against what you said in your profile- "do not review or send me messeges ur if going to be fucking bitches" I'm just trying to help you. You have great story line ideas but the way you are writting them makes nobody want to read them.

Oh my. This story needs SO much work. First off all what kind of spinal conditon does Jamie have? Did you do ANY resarch on it? Because it looks like you didn't. There are MANY types of spinal conditons & each one is different. I know what I'm talking about- my older brother has one. To be more specfic he has- Chiari Malformation.

What is going on with your writting? To be quite frank it sucks. BIG time. Anybody who tells you different has NOT read a good story. Harsh but true. Your writting is like a 5 year olds. I hate being so mean but you won't listen to anybody else who HAVE talked to you nicely. Maybe I can get it through your you do have potential but you HAVE to work at it. You need to work on ONE story at a time. Get a betta. Use spell check. Take a writting course. Learn how to use proper grammer. Resarch what your writting about. Have more than one person look over your work. Cont.

great story

great story please update

great story please update

great story please update