Well done for continuing! An excellent chapter. I particularly like the writing in the first two paragraphs, I think it's beautifully descriptive.

A very nice chapter. I like the 3rd person multiple POV. It's something that often doesn't work, but it feels natural in this fic and the switches between the thoughts of the two characters are very clear. Good job! Keep writing :)

Please update. There is so much potential for this story and eventhough i ship leon with ada before. I switched sides coz my girl Angela is more smokin hot.. Please dont give up with this story. Thanks

AAAAAAAAAH
I'm so happy D
That make my day actually

Curiouser and curiouser... Very exciting. Well done on getting the chapter posted. Bring on the next!

Excellent stuff - exciting, full of drama and action, romantic suspense and I love the lighter moments with the team. Make sure you finish it!

I NEED MOOOORE
There is not enough fanfiction for this couple and yours is so well written
So please
PLEASE
Write more of those

Really good drowning scene! I almost choked and nervous while read i when/what will happen to her even i know she's not going to die! Leon's reaction. Priceless. The man mission is to kill angela? *need to re-read bck*
Will she talk about it? Because she's not even know someone is after her. But the gut telling her? THANKS A LOT FOR THIS UPDATE AND STILL CONTINUE! PLEASE MORE.

I know this is gonna be a crappy first review but I hope it is at least helpful. I will start with the most obvious to me and point out that a "click" stands for Kilometer. So you can see why fifty clicks might be overstating the distance between the heroes.

Action was okay but felt a little rushed this chapter which killed the tension. You want to keep things fast but not gloss over everything so as to leave only a mechanical, observer's view of the action. The reader should be in the action, not watching from a safe distance.

Hopefully I can be a better reviewer next time, I try not to be nit picky and focus on only larger topics or glaring issues. Good luck with the next chapter!

GOD! i MISS this! and.. actually their second meet *second right?* kinda bad ass of her by kicking his ass. everything happen so fast! heck- but i really appreciated the moment they have even small. and- who's that man that grabbed her?!

God! Sanguini try to threaten Leon? funny- and yeah- Leon kinda inappropriate last time she's with Angela- omg- i miss her- so TRICELL is connected!? thank GOd you update! im waiting it so much!

I am seriously like this new version and whole that happen. More detail and a lot of logic. Also. This Angela i love ti see again! Please update!

Od! Ou come back! Omg i am so missssss the RED of this one! Please sooo do sooooo continue!

Oh I would thought the same thing too; half expecting the dude to be there but no he wasnt D: Hope theres more :3

D: oh no Angie is sinking omg it could be a deja vu o.o