Honestly this is a good story but I absolutely hate it she gets let off the hook with another dude. And for not trusting him.

I get he loves her but plenty of stories have similar situations in reverse where Edward has to earn his spot back.. but Bella just had to endure a child like tantrum and within a week, they are good.

I quit.. if Edward has gotten with another girl, it would be a big deal.

So he's not ok with her not trusting him but he's ok with getting with another dude? THAT'S backwards as fuck.

Reverse the situation and Edward is a cunt for kissing)dating another person. She is one imo.

bella is fucking dumb

I have no idea if you read reviews anymore, but I'll leave one just in case. I've come across this story multiple times and never once read it, despite being interested in the summary, because of the crazy amount of negative reviews. Well yesterday I was in need of a story to read and I stumbled across your account and was going through your stories and found this one, once again. I decided I would read a few chapters just to get a feel of it and if the reviews were right and it wasnt good I'd just stop reading. I have no idea why people were complaining so much. Once I started reading I could NOT put this story down. I stayed up all night reading it! I'll admit this Edward was, for sure, a horrible human being for a chunk of the story. Your Bella was annoying for a while too. However, after sticking with the story and learning more about your characters and uncovering their backstories it really made the way they act make a lot more sense. Eventually your characters grew up and became absolutely wonderful for each other and this became a really wholesome story to read. I really did enjoy it. The only thing I really wanted to see that you never mentioned was a conversation between Rose and Bella about what happened in high school. Bella mentioned Rose was awful to her but then it was never brought up again. Suddenly Rose was this great person and their past beef just didnt exist anymore? I wouldve loved to see Rose mention it. I'm so glad Edward and Bella resolved things with their fathers as well at the end, that was a lovely touch. Anyway, this was a great story. I had a lovely time reading it. Thank you so much for sharing it. Now I'm on to read some of your other stories! xo

I think we all knew that there were no balls other than his in his pocket lol

Well...I just lost all respect for Bella. So, bye bye.

The falling for someone is my favourite part to read about and you rushed the hell out of it. Feels more like a one shot, minus the lemon at the end.

Really really loved it! The story line and the characters were awesome. Thank you so much for sharing:-)

finished already...Hun..?
well loved this one...

Ah I hate that she's like giving in so easily! Make him work for it, be better Bella! Be better!

Great story!

Thank you so much fo writing and sharing this entertaining story. I loved reading it.

Damn Bella lol... i knew Jasper rushing her out the house would led too something

This is one of my favorite fics. I was recently thinking about it and wondering if I would be able to find it again. Then a friend of mine shared it on Facebook from one of her memories. She asked if it was with the read. Hopefully she enjoys it as much as I did.