What a retard story. This bitch Susan have the never to scold harry after what smith did to him. If I was in Harry's place I would have slapped that bitch Susan and told her to fuck off. What a disgusting story with the same harry who let everyone walk over him. You are one bloody stupid writter. Only harry has to mature and see things from others prospective but other should not do that. You are a pathetic writing write this shit.

This was one amazing story

“Harry ignored the cheering crowd, choosing to flash a look of gratitude at Bagman and headed towards the medical tent. He was surprised, however, when he saw Ron and Hermione waiting for him there.

"Harry," he said, very seriously, "whoever put your name in that goblet — I — I reckon they're trying to do you in!" It was as though the last few weeks had never happened — as though Harry were meeting Ron for the first time, right after he'd been made champion.

"Caught on, have you?" said Harry coldly. "Took you long enough."

Hermione stood nervously next to Ron and opened her mouth. "I'm sorry," she whispered. "I'm sorry we weren't there for you."

Harry saw Ginny and Neville also approaching and sighed. He looked at Ron and Hermione coldly. "If you don't mind, I'd like to celebrate with those who helped me survive the dragon today."

Hermione looked close to tears and Ron looked very ashamed of himself, but Harry ignored them. They slowly walked back to the stands.“

At that moment...

Ron and Hermione realized...

That they really screwed up.

That last line that was intended i died laughing

So i got up to the end of CH6 and i just cant read anymore. Susan is a complete bitch in this story. Like seriously Zach literally tries to kill her boyfriend and she defends him as her boyfriend is laying in the hospital bed? And then after that Harry is all like oh its my fault?! Yea thats so unbelievable even for a fantasy world.

This is a fantastic story! You did a good job of balancing Harry's growing skill with the problems that comes with them (arrogance, distance from friends, potentially losing his way). Thank you for writing this!

Wow so just because Susan is a girl she can insult harshly to harry like that and harry has to tolerate all the nonsense what if Susan asked harry and harry said the same thing to susan to think that she rejected him while considering corner who talks sweetly first then after getting sex breaks the girls hear and Susan thinks he wants to be with her and harry doesn't wow so harry could ask her as friend u know what u R one of the most motherfucking writter of all time Ur mother must have fucked ny

I just want to say that I've been enjoying your fic a great deal, and that it's probably the most intelligent depiction of politics I've seen in this medium.

Dumbledore didn't know about Riddle and Chamber first time, Myrtle stopped and then somehow nobody else.
Dumby knows second time around, and miraculously every single student was petrified, not killed. When Harry went to face Basilisk, Dumby had been thrown off Hogwarts grounds. All the other students he could have saved by stalking Ginny and saving them. Same thing with Quirrel, Dumby was specifically in London and off Hogwarts grounds when Harry made his attempt for the stone. Ginny said they must protect physically and sexuallynot mentally. So she can be suffering from Diary but Tom never physically hurt her or molested her (children's book helped there I think).
Ginny actually made Harry's argument for him and all but proved Dumby was behind it all haha.

You forgot to have him kiss her :o
I feel cheated.

At the end of chapter 7 I could only imagine the photo of lily and James dancing with the wind

Like yeah Ik it’s suppost to be love but I mean he was kinda master of death at that time

WAIT! Was the power he knew not! The deathly hallows!

Dislike the way you portrayed Susan at the start, she's a bitch to claim it isn't about him then rant how because of Harry hufflepuff haven't had glory?

This is such an amazing story. Your characters are alive, I was just looking for a typical a fourth year abandoned fic but you gave me seven great chapters with interesting characters with there own dynamic view and wants. I'm sadden your story hasn't updated in a while but great job anyways.