I thought this was beautiful and amazing. I lived thconcwpt w/ the trees amazing. Great work here!

This was utterly amazing and so beautifully written. I cried. Great job!

Wow! This fic is beautifully written - it's almost like poetry. The way you've written it is amazing, with the reoccurring scene, and the snippets of story that manage to weave a complete tale. I love it, really and truly! Keep up the brilliant work! xxx

This was enchanting. I got so lost in it.

omg that was so cute and sweet and...UGH perfect i loved it great job

Oh, this was beautiful! Absolutely lovely. I felt Merlin's heartbreak and then joy, at the very end.

Wow! This was amazing! I adored how you used the same line for the opening of each part. Very powerful.

It's very impressive that you managed to fit practically a whole life time (and more!) into so few words. Seriously fantastic.

Amazing job.

~BecsX

P.S. You should definitely put this forward for the contest! I'll look forward to seeing it on the comm.

wow. this is good. Really good. it made me think of Brokeback Mountain :) i loved how it was a flashback at the end and it still ended on a happy note becuase of the memory

Oh Wow. This was amazing. It was happy, then secretive, then sad, and happy all over again. Beautiful.

By all means enter it in the contest. This is melancholy, and sad, but uplifting at the same time. Lovely imagery. I like the ending as well.

I'm such a girl. Well... yes, of course I'm girl but I started crying in the end. It was so sweet and sad. But they met, didn't they? Maybe it took them centuries but they did.

I love the way as you showed nature here. I aways felt that thare is something magical in trees. They're on the earth so long. They can see lots of things. They can notice what the people don't. Just like here. :)

Amazing. I would write so much more, but this is all I can think of saying. Amazing.

This is lovely, I particually like the last bit. Well written, you should definately enter the contest.