This story is already 10x better than half the fics here, and even though I know we probably won't get any more chapters, I still want to say thank you for a great beginning. It was still worth reading :)

It is amazing. Please please please update soon! I really hope you haven't given up on this story!

Update please your story is good

Please update!

This movie is my favorite. Of all time. I can watch every month and not get tired of it. Because I love the characters.

And you do the movie great justice. I like that you stick to canon.

Not to mention, I'm excited about how you will extend the story. I wanna know what happens after the movie ends. (Who doesn't?) Reading your fic would be like watching the movie sequel.

I'm telling you I wouldn't mind if you introduce some new elements in the story, some new mechanics of the sands of time, or a new power, or a new character. If there was a sequel movie, they're bound to do the same thing.

Please update soon. :)

It is one of the best. Wish you'll update soon

Update?

THANK YOU! Your story is believable to le core! I loved reading it and it's so well written! Thank you!

Loved it!

I really enjoyed reading their conversation in the garden :) update!

Okay, so far this is the best PoP story I've read. You really have captured the characters and actually have a real plot going on. Congrats on not being like 95% of the other authors on this site. Keep up the great work!

Aw, so sweet! Again, great job staying in character!

Great beginning, can't wait to read more! It seems no one can truly capture these characters but you seemed to have done the impossible: the first chapter was amazing and in character!

Keep up the great work!

I just started to read Prince of Persia fanfiction so I'm no expert, but, of the several stories I've skimmed through this one is the best so far. I feel you have pin down Tamina's inner thoughts pretty well in the first three chapters and I look forward to read more. I think one of the most difficult thing for authors is to show not tell the readers what the charaters are thinking and feeling, and you seem to do the former, not the latter. Thank you for an enjoyable read and I hope you update the next chapter soon. I am eager to find out what happens next.

This story is amazing!

Or rather, I can tell its GOING to be amazing!

You have characterizations spot on and I love how you added in details about Alamut's government...it's details like those that make the story seem real!

I can't wait for more!

THANK YOU!

I love the story so far, please update soon!

I like the way Dastan manages to tease Tamina, without her knowing... If you are planning to write the story again from Dastan's POV, I would be most interested.

Cally