cute. and very funny. :-)
now i had to imagine all of them in the shower... hehehe

I am crying with laughter! Gen and Reno most certainly deserve one another, being the lovable perverts that they are, although they would make a miserable couple. And angeal is way more sneaky and evil than anyone suspect.

Hi, really nice, just see them all half naked in the shower... what a sight :D

Nice story.
1sunfun

Cute, I think you need to up the rating though...

Can you say stamina?

That was drool-worthy. I could just imagine the scene of towel-clad Cloud standing in a room full of Firsts. Seph asking about his birthday is humorous.

love the story!

Haha...aww...so cute!

I absolutely loved this! Though I wish there was mooooore of the Cloud x Sephiroth (*Fan girl scream*) parts! Great job on the story! :D

Loved it! Especially when Sephiroth asked Cloud how long till he was 15. LOL!

Brilliant oneshot. Love how you wrote Cloud. I'd love to see a sequel to it! _

We love you no less for it being 6000 words.

So. . . do you really mean it about a sequel? This was rather cute, and I would not have minded a longer fic showing how Sephiroth seduced Cloud over those 9 months of waiting. (And even going so far as to arrange a mission to keep Zack and Angeal away for a few days. Sneaky man; probably had help from Reno and Genesis, but still perfect.)

Loved what happened, and not too heavy on the OOC-ness. But then again this is humorous, so that's allowed.

Well if you do a sequel or not, please continue writing so I may continue reading.

~ Lynn StarDragon, the Happy Dragon

I can't believe I readed this LOL. That was very funny just like you told me. Keep up the great work.