Awh wow lol

Love this chapter and you version of this episode.

I LOVE IT! While I was a little confused with the generals and bad guy scheme in general, the story line worked well and my confusion didn't detract from the aww moments of your story. Totally worth reading. Thank you for writing and keep up the great work! -Jesi Ki Kage

this fic had a good plot, but the characters are a little too OCC for me, and i feel that it's moving a little too quickly. that's just me though, lol

Huzzah for graphic scenes! Do you like writing about torture? 0.o

The final fight was too short, though.

Good job.

WOW! This was great!

AWSOME!

This is great i loved it!

You write very well...keep up the good work _

what is going on? aarrggh! what's up with the 'story not found'? geez! one of the few GOOD & COMPLETED stories i find and STORY NOT FOUND? uughhh! please fix it! i wanna read the rest of the chapters!this has got to be one of the really good stories!

that was *sniff* so great! i was so moved...i'm thinking...SEQUEL! seriously it was an awesome story. i was worried there for a second that everyone had died! but i'm so glad everything turned out okay, even if they weren't superheroes (lol) anymore.

Hey, I totally loved your story! It's nice how Serena and Darien got to together. Seriously this story was amazing. Write more stories ASAP.

Oh...My...God.-I feel like crying. This fanfiction was the most moving and well written piece I've ever read, and I mean EVER. I give you the BEST MOVING FANFICTION AWARD EVER award. My gosh, I'm just blown away by how great this was! I loved it. If you -ever- write a sequel, you know I'll be there! SUPERB fic, VERY VERY wonderful.

Sorry, but I'm back now. loved the chapters that I missed, it was good and sweet. I am hoping you do a sequel 2 this. If not it's ok. ) Well, cont. on your writing and good-luck.

*thunderous applause* That was great! The perfect end to an incredible story!