This is short, sweet, and intense (sweet as in, for the reader, not the characters). It's interesting how Azula is actually calm and collected and Katara is full of rage. Quite a role reversal.

I liked it. I wanted the two of them to meet, that would have been very interesting...

This was very good. The part where Azula contemplated the fair complexion of the firebenders despite their source of energy being the sun - spot on. Your writing was excellent; your descriptions and phrasing. Loved it!

wow amazing powerful chapter. Please update soon :)

this is good. I hope you contuine with this story soon. It seems interesting. Please update as soon as you can. :) And keep up the great work.

Wow, this looks so promising! Your writing style is beautiful and very enjoyable to read. You've already seemed to nail both characters. I'm really really looking forward to see how they interact with each other. I hope you're planning to continue this!

this is good so far i like how you put the motion of water bending into a surreal experience and the power of fire in the first chapter too I'm looking forward to more of this

Very nice chapter. Poor Katara. She seems to be having a tough time. Will Azula be the one to help her or will it be Katara who helps Azula? Was that 'Demon' light Azula? Why would she run though? When will they meet face to face? What happens next?

Fantastic start! I love the idea you have going here. I realy enjoyed the peak into Azula's character in this first chapter. So does Azula's plan go off without a hitch? What will she do if she concurs the city? What happenbs next?

oh? the next chapter looks to be even better than the last 2, can't to see how it goes :)

This is actually very interesting, original and well written. Can't wait to read more. Update soon please!

Good stuff here. One can feel the sentences, the rhythm, sometimes even the paragraphs and structure aspiring. Raw talent that succeeds at being more than sophomoric and leaves a genuine aesthetic impression.

You're missing an "a" at "firebenders are special kind" However, both "special" and "kind" are too weak to carry the strength the sentence is trying to achieve, especially since you use the same phrasing later at "special kind of soul" (where it works since it's not trying to carry the end of the sentence) In general, you want to avoid using the same words too close together, as it, in general, can create a monotonous effect (alas, irony fail)

"special breed" would be a stronger phrasing as "breed" is more specific and powerful than the vague "kind." "a breed apart" is even better, showing much finer grained contours of Azula's thought and adding a strong literary flourish that continues to build your thoughts momentum rather than sapping it right at the crucial lead in to the paragraphs final sentence. (It also makes it so the "special kind of soul" later doesn't taste of repeat)

Still... it's overall good and works. I'm only giving you this CC because you show promise of being able to profit from it. I can hear your daimon calling. PM me. I'll post-beta this first chapter if you wish.