I'm confused is Doriy suppose to be a girl or a guy? Because if it Doriy is a girl then you got some stuff to fix along with if Doriy is suppose to be a guy.

Wish you would finish this story I love bella bashing

I just like it !
The idea is interesting and you write well !
Will you continue this story ?

Thanks

...Please continue this. It seems really interesting so far and I would love to read more. So...please? _

oooooh, this story promisses some exitement so far...:) cant wait for more, and your writing style is very impressive, you must have taken the time to make sure there were no errors. loving it,

rukia

Thank you for updating! I can't wait for more

Hope you update soon :)

I'm curious of why there is Apollo bashin'? is he gonna want to mate Dori? and Edward gets in the way? or does the other Gods hate him?

cute lov it lov the chapter plzs update soon

Please update. I love this

hello hottie Cullen, I prefer Jacob or even Emmett but he's okay I guess.

sounds like an amazing story! can't wait to read more!

I really enjoyed your first chapter and look forward to more of this story.

I am especially curious as to why The sun is dangerous for Dori.

OMG MORE! YAY it's an mpreg :D I love it already and can't wait to read more.

YAY! Hi5 bro! XD I LOVE this and especially with all of the stuff you told me you were planning! XD You better update soon! Don't forget that we share a house! lol