| Reviews for Divided We Fall Part 1: Sick Days |
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DGtnsl chapter 11 . 11/29/2012 Aw, poor Kagome. Nice ending though, I can't wait to read the next part to see how Inuyasha is doing. I wonder if he'll get glimpses, brief images, of what he went through. I also wonder if taomaru and kagome will meet in reality and actually recognize each other, recalling what they went through in the dream mesh. Speaking of the dream mesh, what happened to that dream demon? I wonder if she's recooperating and planning her vengance on the priestess she had drawn into her web. |
DGtnsl chapter 10 . 11/29/2012 You were right. The scene wasn't two graphic and it was elegantly written. I liked how you didn't jump right into it, but eased into it by first showing what was happening in reality. Myoga tasting the sexual excitement in their blood was a good addition. |
DGtnsl chapter 9 . 11/29/2012 Poor kagome, though she secretly has been wanting this too. This thing about Inuyasha' personality being split in two is interesting. I wonder if either of them will remember this encounter when they wake up. I'm also curious about what the dream demon will do in retaliation. Hopefully though, Miroku and Sango will finally sense it and destroy it before it can do any More damage. |
DGtnsl chapter 8 . 11/29/2012 So only Kagome can wake up and the other three are stuck in the dream world? Okay, that helps explain why they're always there and why Inuyasha seems to be sleep walking (what am I typing, of course he's sleep walking!). Inuyasha's demon blood is another characteristic that he hides, and we see him fight it in the series, so it makes sense that that rage is another suppressed attribute being shown. I liked how Sesshomaru protected kagome in his full dog form, showing more of that nurturing side. makes me wonder though, is he still naked with only his tail and that shirt to cover himself? And is taomaru still in his boxers? That would make sense since they can't wake up (unless they found out how to control what they wear, or found more clothes like the tee found earlier). Thanks for that little warning at the beginning of the chapter. I had been wondering why this story was rated M dispite everything I had read up to this point being T stuff. Now I'll be ready. |
DGtnsl chapter 7 . 11/28/2012 Oooh, it seems that the demon doesn't want Kagome to leave that house, cause I seriously doubt that her sickness made the room spin like that. Taomaru did say that hidden aspects of a personality are brought out and displayed in strange ways while in a dream mesh, so could this be one of Inuyasha's hidden sides, his lusty side? That makes sense to me. And I wonder what that pattern Inuyasha made on Kagome's neck means. Is it something to keep her in the house, maybe That's what made her so dizzy. |
DGtnsl chapter 6 . 11/28/2012 So there Is a dream demon involved! I wonder what that secret that came up in Kagome's earlier dream is. Kagome is seeing the {very} pent up characteristics in sesshomaru, which have turned him into a child. This dream mesh thing is so interesting! And very entertaining (for me to read and imagine, not for the characters) So everyone is in their night clothes right? If so, is Taomaru from the modern era seeing as he's wearing boxers? Kagome's wearing her pajamas right? If so, then that would mean Inuyasha will appear in pajamas as well. I wonder what's happening to him. I like this bond thing too, nice touch! |
DGtnsl chapter 5 . 11/28/2012 Sesshomaru in the modern era?! What's he doing in Tokyo Tower? More too the point, how'd he get into their dream mesh? Or maybe, this isn't Sesshomaru, but that creature that killed Kagome last time disguising himself like Sesshomaru again. Inuyasha, where are you? He'll be the hardest to find won't he? This Taomaru is interesting. Is he the relative mentioned in the story summary? I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
DGtnsl chapter 4 . 11/28/2012 O.M.G. On the night of the new moon, Inuyasha has his first illness. And of course it has to be the flu. I wonder if the others will get the flu too. Poor Higerashi family (excluding Kagome, though poor her being sick and all), they would have to deal with the whole gang, minus Shippo, being sick! I sure Inuyasha will only be sick that one night, his demon blood perging the illness when the sun rises again, but it'll be a long night for him. I wonder if this dream thing will visit Inuyasha now too. |
DGtnsl chapter 3 . 11/27/2012 Maybe, Inuyasha, you should listen to you're human side more often. Sango would have been a better choice to get Kagome's clothes, and there wouldn't have been the need for an arguement to strain Kagome's nerves. Great chapter! I really liked how you made Shippo, Sango, and Miroku come through the well. How do they even know that only Kagome and Inuyasha can go through anyway, have they ever tried going through it? [I know Shippo has, but what about the humans of the group?] |
DGtnsl chapter 2 . 11/27/2012 So Inuyasha Had been there. At least Kagome wasn't hallucinating! How'd he get there again without the other's trying to tag along? And what about that part with him not being able to protect himself? That means it's the night of the new moon right? Wouldn't Kagome have noticed this? Oh, wait. This is the plot thickening isn't it? Oh, I can't wait! |
DGtnsl chapter 1 . 11/27/2012 Kagome's sick, oh no! and someone cared for her, was it really Inuyasha? I've been sick before but never with the flu *thanks her lucky stars* so I can't really relate to how she's feeling, but I do know she really shouldn't even Try to study. I can't wait for what happens next; does she get revisited by 'Inuyasha'? or does she question him when she gets back to the feudal era? |
Rosalind du Coudray chapter 11 . 9/12/2012 LOVE IT! I freaking cannot get enough of this fic! Please continue eventually! 3 |
elf mermaid chapter 11 . 6/15/2010 Wow! This is an amazing story! I can't wait to read the rest and thank you for writing this! |
The Midnightmoonflower chapter 11 . 11/24/2008 Aw please contiune it now do you know what year it is? |
hentai18ancilla chapter 1 . 9/24/2006 Cool! A sick Kagome-very vulnerable-and a hot inuyasha...lo voy a terminar despues, plz write other stories since this one is done. I LOVE IT! -Dani. |