Awww cute, amusing, and wonderful, I loved it and nice job, thanks for sharing

I got an idea: Yamato gets sick and Tai cares and comforts him

Could you try making a foursome with tai,matt, kouji, and takuya

You may want to work on keeping the names the same. Try to stop switching between English and Japanese(manga) names. Consistency makes for a great story. :)

OMG I loved reading that so much!

It was so sugary sweet and the ending with the whole 'wife' thing was just adorable! I really really loved your story. x

A very good oneshot. But you don't need to be too formal there are plenty of variants. For example: stick, rod, member. Also you should decide if you're gonna use their original japanese names or those from the dub. Finally even if he is the uke in the relationship it doesn't mean he's a wife. Technically, since there are two boyfriends; there are two husbands.

this is so sweet~

made me aaww-ing and giggling when I read this..

thank you for sharing~ :D

It was cool :3

I, too, get annoyed when people call it a guitar. It has four strings, right?

But yes, this was a very cool story :3

enjoyed it a lot :)

Um, ok, I liked the story, though I'm not one for reading sex scenes. *blushes* The only thing I will say is this, you should really stick to a certain name for then. You kept switching the names. Tai or Taichi? Matt or Yamato? Also people call it a guitar because, well, that's what it is called here.

loved it! so sweeeet! 3

Hot~! This was a very good story! Love it :D

Yay! I'm the first to review~ First~~ xD