please continue this story and update soon

come back

very nice creation of characters! this story is very interesting, and I love what you've done in it, so far! so sweet!

This is a great story. I would like to see more of it. But I also like that it stops here. All is good, Kyoko stands at the beginning of the rest of her life and now I can imagine how the rest will go.
So a sequel or a shot from the future in which they talk about there childhood would be really fun to read.
But I don't mind that the story stops here. It is a good stopping point.

update this please

I wish I knew how this ended this is a wonderful start to a story

And now we know why Seana hates her child and her connection to the Fuwas . Corporate espionage and Seana boss is Sho's uncle. Not that I think those are good reasons to hate your child. I for one (as a mom myself) don't think that's a good enough reason.

Por favor, Por favor, me fascina la historia, la podrías continuar, esperare con ansias su progreso

I like this story. It's full of different views about how Kuon and Kyoko grew up. Can't wait to see how things progress as they grow. Like Rick a lot too. Good job.

plz update as soon as possible this is a story that I've been waiting for

plz update soon

I hope by whatever means that Kyoko would get the princess part. That would be such an accomplishment for her to unconsciously display the talent her father has without prior training, just a concoction with the use of her imagination. Then again that does not fall far from the original. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very entertaining, and the Soma cameo is hilarious.

Ohhhhhh my! Don't u'll continue this fic? Isssss soooo perfect_

Its so cute. I would love to see Kyouko have a challenging but sweet child hood. Please update soon.