aw, that's too bad. it sounded quite interesting. Well, I'll be waiting then.

Hoping that you'll post soon, like it!

so zuko's a waterbender and firebender now cool

Just read your first chapter, and the idea sounds really promising. Looking forward to your remake!

:) This is some good work. The fish scene wasn't bad at all, and was a nice change from, so and so cleaned the fish. You have a good idea, nice flow, and generally good grammar. I can't wait to see whats with this Iqniq/Hakua person (lol, though for a second I was like 'Is this turning into a time ravel fic or something?'). Hope you continue!

oo very interesting. i'm hoping to draw wisdom from your expertice in wrting ;) i flattery talk: i want to study your fic to better my own. i like to draw knowledge from other sources; my fic is lacking depth (and time) :(

at first i was confused, but i just kept reading and i caught on. nice idea and good job.

I like this premise. Unfortunately, there isn't enough of the story for me to give any critique on the plot yet. I really want to see more of this. I know it's been a while, but know that I am waiting for the next chapter :)

I really like this story so far and I am excited to see how it develops.

I'm glad you mentioned that you changed Hakua to Iqniq. You accidentally left the name Hakua in some sentences and in the summary. It was getting a little confusing.

To be honest, I kinda like the name Hakua better than Iqniq. I imagine the only problem some people might have with it is that it sounds a little too much like Hakoda...but that's part of the reason why I like it.

Nice chapter. Waterbending Zuko always makes me happy. I can't wait to see the waves that news would make.

Your writing skills are great. I really enjoyed this first chapter. The length is just fine.

It's too early to say something about the plot, however, so I'll refrain from making any comments on that. But with that kind of writing ability I'm sure it'll be great!

If you want to find authentic sounding names for the two nations, type "Guide to Naming Avatar OCs - Updated Water, Air, Fire" in Google and you'll see a forum thread that will help you. Hakua seems a little strange, and a little distracting.

This is fascinating, so far, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it. It looks like it'll be very interesting!

There's _never_ a good time to tell your nephew he's related to the Avatar. *G*

Zuko's visit to the South Pole was intriguing, especially Hakua, and I'm looking forward to more! :)

Alright you have my interest. This should be good. lol Zuko fainted. There aren't going to be two Avatars is there? Have you read Vathara's Embers? check it out if you haven't.

Looks interesting so far. Keep up the great work and update soon!