Very well written.

I like! Lovely flow and vivid description. there was something very real about that story...real human emotion and just simple common but essential everyday occurances that gavve it that lively touch :)

Always keep faith :)

A Forgotten One

Love it, although I must admit you scared me! This is great :).

I'm so glad you re-posted this! It made me happy to read again. :)

It's a nice short story. I was happy that Jem didn't die. That was a scary thought.