Loved this story and its so nice to see House protecting Chase twice from that guy Ryder and great you got them back together.

Hope you show the wedding as the ending.

Anyway nice twist of making Blythe and John switching roles in your story, in the show Blythe was always the more caring and comprehensive mother while John was an abusive father but you made a nice twist.

I loved your version of this very sweet snd loving House who becomes a better person because of Chase.

Please update

I really hope you decide to continu this story!

This is pretty interesting i can't wait to read more and actually see the wedding... It would be cool if Rowan actually did become a better person i think you have dumped enough sit on the poor blonde just in the first 10 ch especially with Rider and Stacy... It's about time something went right for once.

this is a long 7-10 days -_- :( plz finish

why does aura call house 'master'?
Same thing as before. it's not the chapter length I'm talking about. it's the amount of stuff you convey that is actually important to the it's still interesting enough to keep me going. c u next chappie

I actually liked the confrontation but it's too short. The other bits... House coulda been more emotional.

First, same thing as last chappie. and second, why does house need her permission to propose to CHASE?

It's another sweet chapter but it's turning out wrong. The plot is good but you are not exploring it, you are STATING it. and that's no good to anyone. Spend a bit of time on it and spin the emotions out :)

Not sure how I think of this opening chapter to be honest. Why would Aura be at the hospital? would they allow random people inside the hospital like that?
I think it's a good thing that you have almost done away with the thought thingy but it's still here (unfortunately). Another thing is all those 'secret signals' stuff which don't really need explaining, if you get what I mean.
Overall, it isn't as well written as I had expected (maybe my expectation was too high. I set the bar just a little above the standard of the best written chapter in 'dear body', which is the one where chase had to speak at the summit) But I'll read on and I'm expecting it to get better ;)

Nice0

Update soon!

I love this story! :) I can't wait until the next chapter, and I hope that your writer's block doesn't last too much longer! If I have any ideas for the story, I'll be sure to PM them to you! .

I was wondering... How do all these people randomly know that people are in the confrence room much less randomly find it? Also why is Chase so child-like..

im sorry bout the writers block:( i'm guilty myself of leavin stories half finished, heh. love your story :D don't feel too guilty about taking your time finishing it.