Reviews for Asleep
habababa chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
I'm always torn if such thing like watching someone sleep is more creepy or cute? In this situation it's definetely cute! Harry was great friend when he talked to Ron about it. The last scene was adorable!
hierath616 chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Reading this one-shot had made realised that there is someone that I love watching when he's sleeping. And I dont think I'll be able to confess it to him. Totally can relate to this one.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Oh no no its beautiful! Yeah i suppose you could call it fluffy but I wouldn't! Not in the bad cheesy OTT way anyway. Its really good, trust me!
I love all your stories, just gonna say.
BookReader101 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Very well written story. I enjoyed it very much.
Imaginationisland chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
You shouldn't take this down; it's wonderful.
wellme chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
hey! I decided to leave a review in a story that you wrote one year ago... How wonderful is this?

Anyways... This is a really lovely story! Your writing is beautlful and the ending just so sweet!

I think you are a great writer! I have read some of your stories-and I promise to read them all- and they were all really beautiful!I have also read your breathtaking sequel "Right Here"! This story made me feel so many things... It made me laugh and it made me cry ... It was so well-written and it seemed like a complete work from a very talented and experienced author...

Anyway... I think I have to end the review here. once again great job!

Love from,

well Me

P.S. Let me know when your first book is released. I'll buy it for sure!

P.S.S. I guess you have noticed that I didn't just reviewed for a story written last year but I also left a review for another totally diferrent story as well... simply wonderful!
CutieWoo chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Aww, this is so sweet! I love it, don't remove it, please. You're a brilliant writer.
hannahinthesky chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Stalkerish, but sweet.
timabain chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Once again, EEEEEEEEEEEEEP! I swear Deathly Hallows should be full of more RonxHermione fluff. :)
President-Of-S.P.E.W chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Aww! I love reading Ron's thoughts about Hermione. Just too cute! Can't wait to read more!
Scrivensabre chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Stalkerish? That's Edward Cullen :P, not Ron Weasley :D. And by the way, best mindless fluff I've read. Btw, are these calendar pics you talk about online? I'd like to see 'em :)
Faithful Wheezy chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
please do us all a favor and DON'T take this down. hahaha, i really do love this - it's very well written, the inner dialogue is just right, everything's in character, and the grammar's excellent. so, don't delete this so i can read it again another time, that would be vunderful
jusnic chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
i definitely think you should keep going. it was a really entertaining story.
Guiltypleasure chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Elegantly writting, capturing the Ron Hermoine dynamic perfectly! I especialy love the way Ron describes her hair as he is watching her sleep, loving all the fluff! And not too stalkerish, it's like a sneek peek into the deathly hallows:)
mergrly3286 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
This is awesome! Nowhere near too stalkerish. Just cute. You're making me wish boys watched me sleep.
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