NIce Story allthough it seems like it doesen't continue.. sadly...

It's very good your story, you're great in describing Lightnings feelings and it's so sad i'm about to cry (in a good way xD)

I'm really excited to how it'll be going on if it'll be going on xD so please i beg you write more of this

I just cannot explain how make me feel this. I haven't a great level of English (i'm Spanish), but I work too hard to understand what had you got to tell.

To be honest, I fall in love with that history. The way that you describes Lightning's feelings and her way to look at Tifa it's fantastic. Really, i liked it so much.

I hope you continue this one because I would glad to read more and more of you, of this, even if I don't know many things. I will try it so hard because yours is worth it.

Greetings!

OMG i love this fic so way you told Light's feeling is sooooo...Please update more 3

Ahhhh! A Light/Tifa fic!

This is good, angsty, but good

I hope you continue

Awe, how'd Cloud die? DX

I haven't read any of your other ficlets, but this was good.

Will you continue this?

Keep it up!

L.L