Reviews for Sinnoh Summer Camp
robbo2480 chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
If you still need an oc heres mine
Name: colin parker
Age: 16
Sex: male
Appearance: short spikey long hair grey eyes 5'9" slim with a pale complextion. Whife. Wears a blue t-shirt with faded black jeans and blue hi-top converse. Sometimes seen in a black zipped hoddie
Personality: Slow to trust others but will open up more as he does. Stubbon and can be very sarcastic. Has aweird sense of humour and enjoys pranking people especially those that annoy him. Has a habbit of giving people nicknames the y dont like nust to annoy them
Home City: sunnyshore city sinnoh
Pokemon: sneasel (f) leafeon (f) arcanine (m) swellow (m) aron (m) larvitar (m)
Family/History: never known is family. Was abaddoned as a baby. Been moved from foster home to foster home until he began his pokemon journey at 12
Ambitions: Trainer
Desired Part: i could be cheeky and say Main character but either Ally or camper is good
Ahkalia chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Name: Arian Mia Lakehead

Age: (13 – 19 best recommended): 19

Sex: Female

Appearance: Arian is fit from all her climbing and the running that she does. She is 5ft tall and 119Ilbs. She has short spiky blue and green eyes. Arian wears brown cargo capris and a black tank top as well as black running shoes and brown fingerless gloves. She also wears a necklace that has a silver chain and a blue oval pendant (unknown to her it holds the aura of a deceased pokemon). She got this necklace on on her 16th b-day and was told that it has been passed down generation to generation. She also carries a green back pack.

Personality: She is very adventurous and often gets into sticky situations. She is good with following maps and directions. She is somewhat picky about her appearance and likes to keep herself clean. She is also very gullible and can tend to have a short temper. Towards people she is stand offish at first but then slowly gets to know them. She loves fire type pokemon and spends most of her time with her Charizard. Her Lucario is always out of it's pokeball.

Home City: Evergrand City, Hoenn

Pokemon: (UP TO 6 ONLY! no attacks): Swellow (M), Blaziken (M), Monferno (F), Rapidash (F), Lucario (M) and Flareon

Family/ History: Lived in a family of 5 until she went on her pokemon adventure which she did in Hoenn. She also went in the Hoenn League and got in the top 10. She then travelled throughout Sinnoh and Kanto. Arian has been working at the camp since she was 17. Also unknown to her she has the ability to use aura (you can have her find out that she can use it in the story if you want).

Desired Part: (Main character/Villian/Ally/Counselor/Camper): Counselor or Ally

Please let me know if I get a part or not sounds like a good story.
per mare chapter 5 . 11/7/2010
LOL I hope Kyle does have a six-pack...*drool* I'm sure Msrina does too! XD

I liked the drama in this chapter...Heck now I wanna read more! Soooo...

UPDATE SOON! Please? :)
Legendary Fairy chapter 5 . 11/7/2010
Don't worry. Wow. I rreally like the chapter. Can't wait for more. I hope Chase and Liz will be friends again and what was that incident?
RoyalShowstopperXIII chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Name: Alister Kazama

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Appearance: Jet black hair with dark red highlights tied in a medium long ponytail

Personality: He's a calm and collected trainer, he's smart and makes his moves very carefully before making them. A nice guy, outgoing but silent and serious when battling other trainers.

Home City: Hearthome City

Pokemon: (UP TO 6 ONLY! no attacks)

Lucario

Scyther

Raichu

Skarmony

Dragonite

Piloswine

Family/ History: Originally from the Kanto Region by way of Celadon City, Alister started with Pikachu and made his way towards each respective region getting new pokemon along the way.

Ambitions: Trainer

Desired Part: Ally

I hope you pick him
AeroTundra chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Yay~ I'll try.

Name: Reena

Age: 13

Sex: Female

Appearance: Short for her age, Light, almost white hair, up in two ponytails. Light purple eyes. Skinny.

Personality: Reena's a music lover. She loves to sing and dance. She owns many pairs of earphones and falls asleep listening to music. She's playful and easy to befriend.

Home City: Snowpoint City.

Pokemon:

Kirlia- First pokemon. Always dances with Reena.

Bellossom- Always sings with Reena.

Frosslass- Found when she left Snowpoint.

Raichu- Found as a pikachu. His left leg had to be amputated after being attacked by a rampardos.

Mothim- Followed Reena.

Family/history: Her dad still lives in Snowpoint, but her mom recently died. The subject still hurts her so she doesn't talk about either of her parents.

Ambitions: Breeder.

Desired part: Ally. Friend...

I hope you add me to your story.
Emo Princess Addie chapter 5 . 11/6/2010
:3, heh I love this I hope u pick my OC
Emo Princess Addie chapter 3 . 11/6/2010
Sorry! This is my third review I forgot something!

Her 3 other Poke'mon

Number 3: Totodile

Nickname: Bubbles(yes she's a female)

Moves: Tackle, Growl, Water Gun, Surf

Personality: Just like her trainer Bubbles is a very sophisticated clam and collected girl

Poke'mon #4: Staraptor(Female)

Nickname: Star

Moves: Whirlwind, Ariel Ace, Close Combat, and Take Down

Personality: Slightly snobby and rude but not to it's trainer and she loves water

Poke'mon #5: Happiny(Male)

Nickname: Sneak(due to the fact he steals her cookies out of her back without Alice knowing)

Moves: Pound, Charm, Copycat, Refresh

and last but not least #6: Pikachu(Female)

Nickname: Thunder

Moves: Thunder, Volt Tackle, Quick Attack, Iron Tail

Personality: She loves new people and battling and completely trusts her trainer

Clothing: Red bow tied to ear and a black choker necklace

Okay well here's my character like I said she always is LATE to everything!
Emo Princess Addie chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
O, and if you do let her in her mom's car(a red sports car) pulls up to the camp and she burst out the door sayin' "SORRY I'M LATE!" lol, think it would be interesting?
Emo Princess Addie chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Hey, hope it's not too late to submit OCS, but if it is...make room for one more!

Name: Alice Star Atkinson

Nickname: Ali (Ah-lee)

Characteristics(looks): Long, Midnight black hair, piercing gray eyes, pale peach skin.

Clothes: a white shoulder-less wavy shirt, long black denim jeans, and black flats. She also wears a white bandanna around her head and carries a white shoulder bag with poke'balls, potions, max repeals, etc.

Personality: She isn't one of those "WEE!OOH!" girly girls and isn't a boy either, she prefers the term "Feminine Tomboy" Alice doesn't wear make-up and as a result, has natural beauty. She cares deeply for her buddy, Riolu and would do anything for him, and a result of that...they have perfectly matched auras and Riolu can talk to her through their minds.

Poke'mon: Riolu(male)

Nickname: Ri-Ri

Moves:

Tackle

Scratch

Heart-Swap(can switch people or Poke'mon's bodies for a short amount of time)

Aura Sphere(even though he isn't a Lucario he learned this move because he isn't like the other Riolu, he's special one of a kind)

Ri-Ri's Personality: He's very calm or collected since Alice gave him a wooden carving of a Riolu, before that he was shy and distant. He's still distant and very smart and calm in tough situations, like he can 'talk' to Alice with his mind.

Ri-Ri's Clothing: he wears a white bandanna the same as Alice's and has a small, white bag around his neck that has the wooden Riolu in it. The Wooden Riolu is his treasure, Ri never let's it out of his sight.

O, and Ri-Ri DOESN'T get carried around in a poke'ball, he either walks along side Alice, or sits on her shoulder. he was only in a poke'ball when he first got him and he HATED the poke'ball!

She got Riolu and an Eevee egg from Professor Oak when he came to visit her in New Bark Town(she from New Bark Town)Riolu picked her for a special reason. There Aura's are perfectly matched and they can read each other's mind's the way you can tell Ri-Ri is telling her something is that Alice will put her hand on her head.

(when she hatches this is her info)

Eevee(female and close to evolving into Glaceon)

Moves: Tackle, Energy Ball, Trump Card, and Take Down

Personality: Happy-go-lucky and a very good battler.

Pick my OC please!

Personality: Happy-go-lucky and a very good battler
MidnightheartXxX chapter 5 . 11/6/2010
Ohhhhhhh. I hope they make up soon. I cant wait until the next chapter(:
callofduty1944 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Name: Eric Bryant

Age: 16

Sex: Male

Appearance: stands 5'10," has short cut light brown hair, wears sleeveless shirts with a different color every day, wearing blue jeans and black combat boots, a scar extending from his right shoulder to his left hip, a Disturbed Fists logo tattoo on his right shoulder.

Personality: Eric is a nice person until something happens to his friends or his family. If anything as such happens, he will make sure that you are on the ground in pain.

Home City: Jubilife City, Sinnoh

Pokemon: Glaceon, F, Eric's starter that evolved from an Eevee after a trip to Snowpoint City.

Blaziken, M, found him abandoned in a forest in Johto as a

little Torchic.

Hitmonlee, M, followed Eric after losing in a fight against Eric's Blaziken. Feels that he can beat anyone in a kickboxing match.

Pidgeot, F, captured in a Kanto forest and usually flies Eric long distances.

Glaceon mostly the one outside of her Pokeball with Eric.

Family: Emily, mom, 47

Joseph, dad, 48

Nicole, older sister, 24

Addie, little sister, 15

History: Eric hated the city life of Jubilife so he, his little sister, and their childhood friend, Alyssa played in the woods on the outskirts of the city. One day his cousin was killed in an incident caused by Team Galatic that caused him to attack in rage and received his scar from the attack from one of their Scythers. His friend also received three scars on her back. She went off on a journey to become a coordinator. His little sister followed her for the same quest as well. His older sister is a Ranger currently on a trip in the northern Hoeen region.

Ambitions: Coordinator

Desired part: Camper and close friend of Chase after a while.

Hope to see my OC here.
hannyfish chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
i know you probably have enough OCs, but if you want another here's one. The story's great by the way!

Name: Sayu Yulimi (otherwise known as Dusk or D)

Age: 18

Sex: Female

Appearance: Tall, 6'2", with short dark brown spiky hair and grey eyes. She tends to wear a crumpled white T-shirt and a pair of dark blue jeans with no shoes or accessories to speak of.

Personality: VERY quiet. She tends to go off wandering and when she's sitting down her knees are up to her chin with her arms around her legs. She also eats a lot of ice cream and drinks too much coffee, but for some reason no one tells her off for it (and she's never hyper!). She also stays up all night every night and sounds pretty much emotionless and bored when speaking. Likes to be known as Dusk to others and D when anonymous.

Home City: Viridian City, Kanto.

Pokemon:

Espeon-her first Pokemon as an Eevee. Found in the woods. Evolved the first night she stayed up all night when she was sixteen.

Groyvle-discovered barely a day after her Eevee evolved, decided to catch it as she didn't want many Pokemon. 2 would do for her. And she likes Groyvles because they're like her.

Family/ History: Miyaki Yulimi (Mother), and her father Ryuu Yulimi tried to bring her up differently to the way she is now, but it backfired on them when she ran off. She found her Eevee (Espeon now) curled up, abandoned in the woods. She got a ferry to Sinnoh from Kanto.

Ambitions: DETECTIVE (well, she sort of is one. Other than that, Trainer. Can you picture her in a Contest? I think not!)

Desired Part: Ally
Legendary Fairy chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
Nice chapter. Can't wait for more. I really liked it.
ElphieUpland chapter 4 . 8/10/2010
Hahaha! I like this chapter a lot, and not just because my OC is in it! You're really funny. I like that Nikki and Elphie are "twins". That was pretty cool! And Justin got beat up by a Pichu! Bahaha! Please continue to update, because I really like this. Pretty please?
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