Reviews for Dolores Umbridge's Big Mistake
Aphrael9 chapter 1 . 8/3
She finally got what she deserved, thank you!
Traveler301 chapter 1 . 5/31
Evidently, I dislike Umbridge a whole more than you do. She was actually hurting the students. Causing them real live pain, bleeding hands, so damaged that her punishments left scars. Even though she died in your story (YAY!), there was no suffering. The bitch needed to suffer a lot before that staircase fell on her head.
Good story but, needed to suffer more.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301
gabzep chapter 1 . 5/13
Lol
MOARMY FOREVER chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
Good work, I always thought that Dolores got off easy for what she did.
Vice Admiral chapter 1 . 12/20/2019
That is how she should have been killed.
fraidykat chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Very nice, short and sweet but so very good in how you wrote it, thank you.
Thank you,
Juanita
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 1 . 10/28/2019
Nice one fitting into a toad
mumphie chapter 1 . 7/22/2019
Oooooo - to bad that didn't happen in canon! evil grin
Fawkes Flame chapter 1 . 7/10/2019
A fitting end to an ugly pink toad...
Really well written - Thank you!
HPandPJO4ever chapter 1 . 5/14/2019
This is really good!
mooneysfate chapter 1 . 3/8/2019
wow, wonderful! :)
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 2 . 12/26/2018
I’ve read this before, but enjoyed it again.
kase519 chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
Smirk
Monster King chapter 1 . 10/8/2018
Great story it was good
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
Awesome!
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