So, I read both chapters.

Enchanting. In first, words lured me in, captivating, enticing, interwoven words reaching out, dancing, swiveling, tangling me in a deluge of memories, anxiety, warmth. Everything moved in slow motion; each moment precious, so quick, yet lasting forever - captured eternity. I love how you made Rangiku's sky 'dark'. We usually know her cheerful attitude and sunshine mask, the outside, and it's great to see herself, her inner self, her mental turmoil depicted as dark night; it complements her well, and how Gin was her moon - pretty. It suited him well. Not glaringly bright, often illusive, incomprehensible, eerie, seemly subdued but can be dangerous. And of course, the tied link between Sun and Moon. Beautiful.

In second. I must say I adored the beginning because of the subtle humor (Gin and his games xD), which was cool. Again, I like how you wrote from both of their sides. It was great to see Gin being written this way. Very interesting and intriguing. The tie was cool; he as her moon, she as his sun. He always watched her watching the skies pass and everything move around them in blurs, and it all makes sense now, no? His whole reason, his action, his decision - all for the person he loved. The bright sun, rising to light his path, giving him the reason to move and live on. It must be hard for him to stay in Las Noches... with the glaring sky overhead, unaccompanied by the sun he longed to see.

This is captivating. A great RanGin two-shots. Amazing job on this.

R/f.

hey hey it's me! I finally got to reading the second chapter! I loved it, of course. I thought it was pretty sweet. :) At first I was like, "No, don't end! I'm getting into this!" lol but that would be cool if there was more.

So I am and will be looking forward to it!

I have it on alert now so i'll know for sure.

Also, I liked how you made him like not wanting to like have the memories and stuff, and yada-yada-yada. lol well keep writing!

I love it! The beginning made me laugh, yet it fitted in perfectly with the ending.

I don't think he's OOC at all! You got him so well, like in that chapter where they leave, in Bleach, it seems just right. I love the angst in this story, because it's not so overwhelming, but it's certainly there.

AHHHH so much angst.

i love it. XD

Aww it's sweet! i like it, and don't think it's too romancy. I'm exciteed for the next part to come out! hopefully there will be more then just two parts, because i really love Gin and Matsumoto. XD

I feel sorry for Rangiku. Its a great story so far. I love it. Update soon. :) :P

I thought it was great! Not overly romantic or anything. And you explained in great detail what happened _ I liked it!

*cheers and cries* that was so amazing I almost cried. Oh my god I love it so much, great story. Very original idea and you made it great. Can't wait till the next chapter.

-blood 3

Very Good! The words you used are detailing the story and it has a great topic!

Great Plot BTW!

Please do keep up your good work! :D

Wow - amazing! I like the description and sutff. Sorry, this is a kinda cbb review because i'm half watching the England vs USA game righ now...

Anyway, can't wait to read Gin's side.

Aw, poor Rangiku...

Update soon, please (:. I have a feeling I'm going to end up favouriting this. And Never Meant To Belong did it for me (.

awsome new story hope you update it as soon as you can