Good job on this story! Ha-ha poor Tyson, though he really should have expected the responce he got XD

I love this chapter!

It's hilarious!

The whole othello thing, OMG! I was laughing so hard!

Tyson being such a dork, lol.

Great update!

By the way, I hope you have a nice holiday! :D

This chapter had me going 'awww'...

It's so cute how her brother worries about her.

Once again, the chapter title is quite fitting.

By the way, sorry for being a stalker here on reviewing... hope that's alright with you. :)

A bit of paranoia in this chappie.

It makes a nice contrast to the warm, comforting tone in the previous chapter.

Quite angsty! i like it!

Gee girl, you're good with cliffies!

By the way, the chapter title fits perfectly with what the chapter is about!

It's nice to see how Naomi receives a warm welcome and some sense of beloning.

Ray is so sweet in this chapter, I just want to glomp him!

You're a good writer, I like your writing style.

it's somewhat intriguing.

One can sense how empty Naomi is feeling.

Kai being an ass but surely we love him for being how he is! I laughed at his answer. 'I'm Kai, leave me alone', that's so him!

So the plot is thickening!

Kai's her roommate, hehehe, I can see where that is going and I like it!

Good name choice for Taro, perfect son, I can imagine how Naomi feels somewhat inferior to him.

By the way, I just had to comment on the title of this fic!

I love the contrast of beauty with something that's normally despicable, such as a lie! Great title choice!

Nice introduction!

I liked the dictionary feature.

Nice psychological thought behind this and good use of language, this story surely has potential!

Naomi seems like an interesting and complex character so far.

The last sentence was quite intriguing. New name new life, heh. And the fact that the name Naomi and Naoki bear similarities indicates that although she wants to she hasn't quite shut herself off from her past. (or maybe I'm just over-analysing, sorry, I tend to do that.)

Anyways, a good chapter.

I love your story so far. It is discriptive without giving to much away, and your oc is interesting so far. I hope that this only gets better. Rock on!