Reviews for Endings and Beginnings
Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2015
I love it! So many descriptions of emotions, for a moment i belived you would live it at chapter1
Anoni chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
Thank you so much! I've been looking for a story that had a realistic parent reaction! Really good job!
Qapleulia chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
oh no I really like this
MyPencilRanOutOfInk chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
I really liked this! I've always thought different fanfics showing Danny's parents finding out where missing something, but this one hits it right on the nail.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
No.

NONONONONONONO. IT WAS TO SHORT DAMNIT.
TheEpicDuck123 chapter 2 . 3/15/2014
now I really want a scene about them talking about Danny's more dangerous adventures
Dream Theme chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
OH MY GOD! LANCER AND DANNY SO CUTE!
IN FACT THIS ENTIRE THING IS CUTE. AHUFOEWHU Oh my lord. This was just so perfect and I loved it and Urgh.
DeathBySugarCube chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
loved the story! and the ending for the story! XD
DeathBySugarCube chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
You were so close! But alas, the power of moms triumphs! XD
EcoNJ chapter 2 . 5/22/2012
Being a semi-recent high school grad, this brought tears to my eyes. I love just how real you make the characters feel. It would be cool to follow Danny into his college years, but I suppose that would just be my own desire to know what happens next.

Keep writing, please. You're an absolutely incredible writer! )
Pinnatus chapter 2 . 4/7/2012
Really great rev fic! Love how the transition between chapters works with the title of the story. Well-written and definitely had its funny moments and still be serious. Tucker's reaction made me lol so much.

I like how you handled Jack and Maddie finding out. Maddie I agree would be a little more emotional and freaked out finding out the way she did, and she would definitely be screaming at all of them. It was a nice contrast with Jack being very cool headed and just very... Jack. Even though we never got such an extensive talk in canon I think you handled it beautifully. They were freaked out, but they accept him.

I wish we got a little more out of Lancer, but the mystery of it is captivating. Perhaps you could write a short companion piece as to how Lancer pieced it together. Great Job!
MsFrizzle chapter 2 . 2/3/2012
Dear Cordria,

Thank you. You are one of my favorite writers.

When I first ran into Danny Phantom fanfic, I found your lovely graduation story. But I couldn't remember who wrote it. I came across it again and was delighted to find that you had continued your story.

I laughed out loud when Danny's mother commented "You'll be late for your own funeral." I might have miss-remembered it but I thought Danny answered "You don't know the half of it." It seemed like the perfect comeback.

I also had to chuckle at Sam's speech because I've heard the Dr. Seuss version used several times at a number of graduation ceremonies.

I also loved the way Lancer had figured it out but was business as usual all along.

So many of your shorts beg to be continued. They have a way of sticking in one's mind.
DPfruitloop chapter 2 . 1/12/2012
I loved this! Keep writing!
Shinjite Florana chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
This review, unlike most of my others, will be short and sweet. Point 1: Yay! Point 2: loved it.
Shenzuul chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
I hate it when you threaten an unhappy ending on a story I really want to have a happy one (and no, for your information, I don't necessarily want a happy ending for all stories), so I read the whole thing with trepidation, and then it turns out well after all. ) Thou art cruel, O writer.

I find it amusing that Mr. Lancer is better at evading questions than Danny is. I also wonder what Maddie wanted to ask Jazz, Sam, and Tucker without Danny around. I choose to believe that she's forcing the truth about the exact amount of danger Danny's been in and how badly he's been hurt in the past while the phantom in question isn't around to do damage control. I love that your stories leave just the right amount up to the imagination. You never write more than you need too-an extraordinary gift.
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