I mean, technically, you didn't need the M/M pairing warning. You didn't actually make the pairing. There might have been SLIGHT indications that they would get together eventually. But really, there wasn't much actually there. So for people who don't like those pairings (despite what you say will happen in the future), this still isn't going to be a dealbreaker for them.

(Only reason I might get annoyed at M/M pairings is that often, they take up about half of the fic's content, or they don't, but literally every single ninja needs to be gay and also in a relationship. It can get tiring. But it's not terrible when done better, even though it isn't my thing.)

Anyway, good on you for finishing this fic sooner rather than letting it die. And it wasn't even as rushed as that usually goes. A little shaky on pacing, but overall a great ending, and a pretty satisfying one.

I believe that "furry little problem" was first coined in Harry Potter (or at least made popular there), by the Marauders to talk about Moony's werewolf condition while being fairly secretive and avoiding as much guilt as possible.

I'm not surprised that many people started referring to Naruto's condition in much the same way.

Kurama gave Naruto sensor powers later on, anyway, so having latent chakra-sensing abilities works well for him. Good cohesion of powers.

GREAT start. You establish the AU, provide a compelling motivation for our main character, and give just enough information for readers to want to continue.

(Also, I like the premise. ;D)

Healers that hit things!

Your decision to have Naruto be a chakra sensor does make sense, as it is not a rare trait in Uzumakiat least, in comparison to non-Uzumaki. I’m not sure about overall.

¡Hola!
Acabo de terminar de leer tu fic, y déjame decirte que estuvo genial. Me encantó la forma en la que manejaste los personajes. Y aunque siento levemente que el final estuvo un poco apresurado, lo escribiste de tal forma que todo terminó teniendo sentido. Los fanfics de viajes en el tiempo siempre son interesantes de leer y éste no me decepcionó en lo absoluto. Eres genial! Sigue así :D
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Lloré con la muerte del Gai de la otra línea temporal.

Your writing skills are exzellent. Kakashi showing sharingan, what amazing scene

wow! i mean, the ending was a tad bit rushed, but it really was satisfying :) im glad that you took the liberty to finish it up for us though!

also, ignore that person down there bashing you for KakaIru - it’s barely noticeable in this fic anyway and didn’t hinder the story telling in any way :D

Kakashi being mean to a psychologically scarred kid who was tortured by his older brother and made to watch his parents die again and again isn't in his character. Asides from Sasuke bashing you've got him spot on. It's just bugging me how he's treating Sasuke terribly for things he hasn't done yet. Sure he's a vengeful asshole, but he was practically taken advantage of and emotionally manipulated by Orochimaru as a TWELVE year old. Being as young as he was and being coeersed into doing bad things doesn't give him a pass sure, but it means that if Kakashi just gave him a chance and steered him in the right direction he wouldn't grow to become such an ass.

In saying that I actually like how you've written him towards Sakura and Naruto, and besides Sasuke, he does come off as a sympathetic character

I remember reading part of this years ago and lost it in the sea of Tabs that is my internet. I'm glad I found it again. Thia is probably one of the best Peggy Sue's I've ever read.

If you don't like getting told off for making two characters gay just so you can get your jollies off, how about you don't post it online where everyone can openly criticize you for it?

Or even better, how about you don't act like a child when people tell you off for it.

I'm glad you decided to finish the fic. Now I feel satisfied. What a great ending! It's great to see how well everything ended up. It was nice to see them all growing powerful and confident. And I loved the parts when Kakashi confronted Sasuke and when Naruto blurted out his Jinchuuriki secret. And of course when Iruka took Naruto in. I absolutely loved this!

A FINISHED? FANFICTION? what sort of twilight zone am I living in this sorta feels like the greatest day of my life (ʘᴗʘ)

…...that was unexpected...….very un expected. But a very good Fic. I enjoyed reading it.